Gps Syntax

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Companies such as, Apple and LG, install GPS devices in smartphones and other types of technology. These (I changed GPS to these to improve the syntax.) devices can be useful in helping someone find their way. Whether they are going on a cross country road trip or just taking a drive around town, a GPS will (I removed “always” because it is an absolute term) help them navigate their surroundings. It is important that GPSs are continued to be installed in devices, such as smartphone and cars. In emergency situations GPSs can even save lives. (I removed the last sentence to improve syntax and it was very similar in wording to a previous sentence.)

Since the start of GPS devices, traveling has become less complicated. Commenting on the topic,(I used a different signal phrase be more formal.) James Stanley explains, “Many cars come equipped with a GPS system or it can be chosen as a feature. With it being preinstalled a driver can choose a destination and listen to a simple voice as they are driving.” The simplicity that comes with GPS systems is astonishing. Drivers no longer (I removed unnecessary words.) mess with the hassle of finding their location on a paper map. Continuing with the idea of simplicity, GPS devices help on time management. They provide people with many options based on travel time and can (I removed unnecessary words.) show someone the approximate time they will arrive at …show more content…

Firefighters, ambulances, and first responders take advantage of GPS technology too (I removed an absolute term to.). It is crucial for firefighters, or ambulances to know the location of someone in need and the fastest way to get there. RM Tracking reported how GPS tracking has made firefighters more effective at assessing and containing a fire. The article states that when someone is in need, tracking systems make it easier to locate the individual in need and the safest route to reach

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