Crybaby Alternate Ending

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“Crybaby?!” The bickering continued,” You are so caught up in your own pity you don’t even know your own name!” “What is that supposed to mean?!” Marcel bit his lower lip as he closed his eyes, trying to remember where he had set down Cammi. Those two...this fog that might as well have been a massive blanket...this day! A deep breath in. A deep breath out. The silence crouched over to huddle down with the family. “Hey.” His voice sounding super hushed. Savannah gasped, only to quickly grit her teeth. Not being able to see was truly bugging her. Monte was going to live, but that doesn't mean anything. She still shot him. She should have moved closer. She- “M’amour.” His touch seemed to wipe the worry and furry from her eyes. Now Mrs. Carmel …show more content…

Her chest rose up and down with a quick rhythm as she breathed. To not wake her, he gently nuzzled his hands and eventually arms around her neck and knees to pick her up. Now, he knew exactly what she was capable of. He saw it himself, but she just seemed like a porcelain doll that if he dared to wake her, it would be something awful. “Marcie!” He herd his mother’s voice call out from behind. Shortly behind her was his father, who held his shoulder in his hand,” Where’s your sis?” “I thought she was with you!” Panic started to run through his veins. “Right behind ya, ma!” Abree came rushing out of the fog, that had turned red yet again, but seemed to be withdrawing. Marcel sighed a breath of relief. Together, they got the heck out of there, heading directly into the town just below the hill. It seemed a millions of miles away but yet, still visible from where they now ran. Strange, Marcel could have sworn that on the way to this location, he couldn’t find it for the life of

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