Creative Writing: You Sneeze-Personal Narrative

You sneeze. Geez! This place is getting on your nerves, that is, if they won’t freeze. Sans was walking next to you, helping you out as you go. There’s been monsters coming at you left and right, and he’s always seemed so nervous about how you ‘FIGHT’ or rather ‘ACT’. It’s kinda weird. Like he was expecting you to do something else. He’s been really weird about everything, actually. He even keeps calling you ‘Frisk’ by accident. You would correct him, but now you’ve learned to respond to the name. All in all, he tries to hide everything with a pun or two, but there’s something off about him, and you dare say that you were going to get to the bottom of it.

Back to the situation at hand, you stare down at the TOUGH GLOVE you were able to

It would have been nice to know before the fight.”

He just kept shrugging,”*i thought you could handle it, kid. if you would have stopped and listened to me-.”

“Look here you lazy sack of bones, I tried to ask for help, but you were too busy skull-king to help me out.”

“*heard those ones before.”

“Dangit.” You say under your breath.

You both continued on your path, running into more dogs and blue attacks as you went. Heck, you even ran into Papyrus a few times and an Ice Cream stand! Well, NiceCream, but it still tasted like Ice Cream. Ya, it was freezing, but boy did it warm your heart! That’s how the sale’s guy put it at least. You were really starting to like the underground.

You saw Sans bend over and pick up a ball of snow. He nudges your shoulder and asks,”*i’ve been thinking about selling treats too. want some fried snow? it’s just 5G.”

“Wouldn’t that just be water?”

“*water you? crazy? nah, it’s the finest fried snow in the underground. just 10G.”

“Wait...you just say it was 5G?”

“*no. why would i sell such fine snow for just a third of the price?”

“But that would make it 15G.”

“*uh, i think you got your math wrong, buddy. it’s

it’s still too low.”

That cheeky skeleton, you swear. Anyways, the two of you continued to progress with the journey. You sure hoped that the whole Underground wasn’t like this place. Sure, doing some silly “Junior Jumble” and running into all the interesting monsters were fun, not to mention hanging out with Sans. All of that was nice, but the cold, icy scenery...it gave you the chills. You couldn’t wait to find a home or maybe a fire.

Not to mention, as the two of you kept going on through the journey, things seemed to keep getting less and less weird with Sans. Maybe he was getting used to you? Whoever Frisk was, he was obviously establishing the difference between the two of you. You kind of wish to ask, but maybe you wouldn’t like that answer. You couldn’t quite place it, but you just had this feeling like you shouldn’t have asked.

You could keep your mind occupied with other things though. Like how. MANY. DOGS. THERE. ARE. Like, seriously! There are dog monsters everywhere! There’s GreaterDog, LesserDog, DogAmy and DogAressa! Sure, they are all adorable, but there is just so many! By the time you were done with their FIGHT, your feet were barking! That’s ruff, buddy. Ok, ya, all these dog puns are rePUGnant but, you and Sans couldn’t help