Creative Writing: A Fictional Narrative

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I flashed them a charming smile and leaned against the bar. “What can I get you ladies? Coffee? Tea? A cab?” It was almost midnight and I was done. Ready to have a few beers of my own, ready to hand over the reins to Fred and make my way to Tuesday. She pushed her boobs against the bar and giggled. “Are you trying to get rid of us, Donovan?” I laughed at the use of my uncle’s name. My fifty-year-old uncle who hadn’t been here all night, but of course I played along. “Now Cindy, why would I want to do a thing like that?” She giggled and snorted. “My name’s Susan, but you can call me whatever you want.” I turned around and blew out a breath. These girls were too much—easy or just wasted. Either way, I didn’t want any part of it. My cell began …show more content…

“I don’t know, man. Tuesday, I think?” So she was telling the truth. Okay. “Is she single?” “I have no clue. Look, I gotta get back out there. You’ll have to grow some balls and figure that one out on your own.” I grinned. “No problem, cover for me at the bar.” Colin laughed. “Nice try.” He pushed through the door to the bar, where he could see one of the girls lying halfway over the counter, helping herself to the bottle of tequila. “The natives are growing restless,” Colin muttered. I blew out a breath and jogged back to the bar. “Ladies, ladies…”  CHAPTER FIVE Tuesday My second beer lasted to the end of the night. Past Becky’s endless flirtation with Colin, past all the wayward glances my eyes took to Donovan, and all the way to midnight, when I was finally free to go home. Colin came toward us—his nametag removed but a wide grin and swagger in its place. Time to go home. I took a sip of water, grabbed my bag from the back of my chair, and hopped from my seat. “Well you guys have fun. My fairy godmother is calling my name.” Becky frowned, somehow making her look more beautiful than always, and grabbed my arm. “Did you have any fun at …show more content…

I was determined not to look over to the bar again. I was being ridiculous. I wouldn’t go out with Donovan if he asked me, yet for some reason I couldn’t stop staring. The last I’d seen, only a few girls remained at the bar, and soon I knew it would dwindle to one. The one. The fan girl who would win the Donovan prize. For some reason, I didn’t want to know. Didn’t want to know if it was the one with the freckles, the redhead, or the blonde with a killer rack. I wanted to go home, crawl between my organic cotton sheets, and fall asleep. I was so tired. Maybe more exhausted than I’d ever been in my life. There were too many orders to process, too many phone calls to make, and too many papers to sign. After I let the crew in the next morning, I’d head back home, turn my phone on silent, and hibernate until winter. When I entered the nearest stall, the door to the hallway banged open, and I turned around. A couple of drunken women stumbled inside the bathroom, both giggling and drunk. I nodded, recognizing the redhead from the bar, and closed the stall door behind me. I hung my purse on the back hook, pulled down my panties to my knees, and then heard someone mention Donovan's name. I froze. I couldn’t help it—I was more interested than I cared to admit and leaned my ear against the door. My heart squeezed in my chest, and my panties were still held up by my knees. “Do you have any condoms? I’m going

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