Comparing Spring Offensive and Into Battle

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Comparing Spring Offensive and Into Battle

These are two poems written during the First World War by two serving

soldiers. They use their own experience of war, their personal and

family backgrounds and their previously held beliefs in writing these

powerful poems, both of which were published during the conflict.

The first poem 'Spring Offensive' was written in 1917 by Wilfred Owen

and the second 'Into Battle' by Julian Grenfell was completed in 1915.

These poems used the contrast between the new life of spring, with the

promise of warmer days to follow and the destruction and brutality of

death on the battlefield.

In Owens' poem he uses spring as a short introduction to the scene and

leads quite suddenly into the horror of death on the front line. He

leads the reader into a calm situation where tired soldiers rest

before they move forward. The soldiers do not have a care in the world

e.g. 'watched the long grass swirl' and 'hour after hour they pondered

the warm field' These first verses are a powerful statement by Owen

describing nature and all the lovely things it provides e.g. 'warm

fields and buttercups'. He then switches the mood dramatically as

'suddenly the whole sky burned with fury against them' to bring the

reader quickly into the fury of the battlefield.

Grenfell also used the idea of spring but continued with the theme all

the way through the poem to the end. He does this because he thinks of

war as glorious where everybody has a good time ' It is like a big

picnic - it's all the best fun one ever dreamed of' (taken from a

letter he wrote to home). Grenfell used the soldiers to express the

energy and strength of nature, reflecting the power and growth of

spring around, as they approa...

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...an feelings, which creates a good picture in your mind.

I think that 'into battle' is a more attractive poem because it

bypasses all the bad things about war. It tries to make you

concentrate on the good side. Grenfell uses a lot of nature to try and

keep his poem attractive and interesting. When the soldiers die he

says that it is not a bad thing because nature will still look after

you. Grenfell saw war in a totally different way to Owen.

I think that 'Spring Offensive' is more convincing because it tells

you the real facts and thoughts about war. It still uses the

attractive side of nature at the beginning, but soon gets onto the

more serious side about the battle. It says what the soldiers are

thinking about. They are thinking about death and hell and what it is

like. The images that Owen creates are very clear, which helps me to

imagine the poem.

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