Attention Getter For Space Exploration Research Paper

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INTRODUCTION Attention-getter: “Space travel benefits us here on Earth. And we ain’t stopped yet. There’s more exploration to come.” (Nichelle Nichols from Star Trek) Credibility: Throughout our childhood as we study space, solar systems, planets we all come to a point of having the dream of exploring the space or learn more about it in the future. Reveal Topic: The cost for exploring the space is high, but the benefits that we get is unmeasurable. Space exploration is an adventure or a journey for humankind, with the possibilities for discoveries that will get the people’s attention and will capture their imaginations and benefit our society in a good way. Emotion/ Audience Connection Main Points: Space exploration is helpful to humankind in every way we think is possible however, exploring …show more content…

Support A: SECOND POINT: Astronaut’s health are the first priority before travelling to space however, it is proven that space exploration or staying in the space can actually affect a person’s health. Support A: According to a study done by NASA, astronauts that stays in space for six months or even longer are found to have some changes in their eyes and their vision. The study tested seven astronauts and found eye structure and vision abnormalities for all of them. Changes are found in the retina, the slightly sensitive part in the back of our eyes. It is also found that some astronauts had them longer after they came back to our planet. (AAO, 2013). Support B: Based on a research, cancer can happen because of too much exposure to radiation. Space has lots of radiation. Exposure to space radiation can have a bad effect on a person’s health. Support C: Travelling and exploring space can actually endanger the life of an astronaut. THIRD POINT: Space exploration needs advancing scientific research, more machineries and equipments which means that it would cost us a lot of

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