Argumentative Analysis

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Several new decisions were made in order to better the documents portrayed in this portfolio. For both essays, the main points were extended, proven, and shown in a way that reflect the overall thesis of the documents. First for “The Future”, the grammatical errors were edited, additional resources were put in concluding information that reflected the essay, and evidence and quotes supported the main claims that wrapped the essay together. The purpose for this essay was to propose solutions for the lack of creativity in public schools. The rewrite was based on the idea of having various resources provided such as homeschooling. Next, the review assignment for Grid 2 “Arcade meets simulation racing”. This essay has also shown enhancements in …show more content…

Taking the viewpoints of other racers can provide insight to how opinions are formed when selecting which kind game is for you. When stacked up against a much better-known game like Forza, it’s nearly impossible to compare the two. There is a great difference in dynamics. Forza is a simulation-based game as to Grid being arcade-based. Showing how others reflect on this distinction demonstrates that comparisons between two major gaming franchises can help the reader when choosing between stylistically different games. The last key point that developed this essay was support from video game critiques like Metacritic. In writing a review, this key point is essential. The reason for this is because most people focus on the positives of their topic when writing a review. However, it is crucial that the negatives are exposed as well. Unfortunately, this becomes difficult because opinion develops and becomes a key component in the essay. I can vouch for this because I found when writing about the negatives related to Grid 2, I felt the need to let me opinion be expressed in the essay. However, the contradiction requires a differentiation and therefore, I was required to do some research and find a connection that expressed the contradiction in the game. Metacritic is a site that provides a means for people to express their critiques through a forum. Their statement “We miss the cockpit view dearly and the game could have benefited greatly from a dynamic weather system and longer races” (Metacritic), proves that a website assesses the negatives in the

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