Analyzing Sylvia's Journey To An Old Pine Tree

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Anticipating the arrival of dawn, Sylvia sets out during early twilight hours to scale the majestic, old pine-tree she has deeply admired for some time from the top of its conservatively-sized neighboring oak. Her harrowing journey is heightened from a young girl simply climbing a large tree to a young heroine conquering an immense pine and achieving her greatest aspiration.
Jewett dramatizes Sylvia’s adventure by increasing the pace of the narrative as she ascends the tree, matching the pulse of her heartbeat and celerity of the adrenaline coursing through her veins. Her journey begins with prolonged sentences, lines 16 through 31, that outline her strategy for mounting the vast tree; the legato phrasing indicates Sylvia’s calmness in climbing her usual oak tree and confidence in her plan to conquer the adjacent old pine. The shortest sentence, one of five, in the paragraph confirms Sylvia’s ease as she “felt her way easily” up the first tree. The second leg of her expedition is described with uneven sentences that portray a more cautious pace that …show more content…

Third-person enhances the intensity of the narrative because it provides a different perspective from the parties actually participating in the action. The observing narrator can focus on the excitement of Sylvia’s journey with less concern for her apprehension than if Sylvia were recounting the experience herself. Omniscience allows Jewett to momentarily stray from simply describing Sylvia to personify the tree who “must of loved his new dependent.” Seeing the action as a spectator permits the narrator to convey simultaneous events as “the tree seemed to lengthen itself out as she went up.” With an omniscient third-person narrator, the passage’s focus is broadened from what a single entity might perceive to capture the entire setting in a highly climactic

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