Analyzing Sharon Olds 'Poem On The Subway'

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The poem, “On the Subway” written by Sharon Olds, expresses the contrast between the rich Caucasian population and the African-American, which is broken up into three sections. The first expressing contrast of the white and black persons through imagery. The second explaining the relationship between them in a shift of tone. And the third describing the white population of America as a whole with another shift in tone. The imagery used in the first section demonstrates the difference between the narrator, who is an implied female and observer, and the black boy, who is being watched, in the subway car. “Black sneakers/Laced with white,”(Line 2-3) are described by the narrator as “intentional scars” (Line 4) due to the zigzag pattern of the laces. The effect of the implied scars refers to the intolerance against the African-American boy by the white culture. The connotation of “intentional” invokes the thoughts of whites consciously harming blacks. Which brings up the contrast of whites being dominate and blacks being submissive. Lines four through five, “stuck on/opposite sides of the car,” characterizes the characters as being separated forever, The third contradictory amongst the woman and boy are their clothing. The boy is referred to as being “exposed” while the woman …show more content…

The section also illustrates the speaker’s trepidation. This being that she is unsure whether “I am in his power... or if he is in my power” (Lines 14-15,18). This statement makes the boundaries between Caucasians and African-Americans not so ambiguous. This making the implication of slavish blacks and domineering whites inaccurate. Another connection between the two is with the reiteration of the word “Life.” But the implied woman cannot determine if the power of her prosperity annexes the capability of the boy or if his potential encroachment annexes her power (Lines

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