Lauren Hale
Leslie Ralphe
English 121-2N3
October 29, 2014
The 21st Century Drug; Neuroenhancers
Margaret Talbot's "Brain Gain" first appeared in The New Yorker. In this essay, Talbot aims to get the point across to her audience that neuroenhancers are used frequently by college students. Adderall and Ritalin are drugs that are designed to help adults and children diagnosed with Attention-Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD), which are now being abused by individuals who are undiagnosed, who are taking these stimulants for, "non-medical" purposes (Talbot 701). Talbot’s essay targets people, who do not believe in using the neuroenhancing drugs without a prescription. Talbot achieves these goals by interviewing a former college graduate from
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Harvard University who abused the neuroenhancing drugs to get him through college. Her argument is effective due to the amount of and support her and “Alex” use to demonstrate the uses and the positive outcomes of the neuroenhancing drugs. In order for Talbot to make her argument valid or for anyone to consider her point, she must make herself seem credible and trustworthy. Establishing her ethos is the most important, and the first step. Talbot makes it clear to her audience that neuroenhancing drugs are a big part of many scholars and intellectuals. She interviews a young man named Alex, a former Harvard graduate, who consumed these so called magical “smart drugs” (Talbot 703). Talbot uses her pathos to paint a picture of Alex in her audiences head. “Skinny bearded, and wearing faded hipster jeans, he looked like a lead singer in an indie band. He was ingratiating and articulate, and smoked cigarettes with an ironic air of defiance” (Talbot 701). Though Talbot uses ethos and pathos in this essay. Alex engages the positivity of the drug. Adderall is put out to seem like the drug that makes the impossibilities, possible. When Talbot was interviewing Alex, he did warn the audience that the drug does not make everything happen, “it only works as a cognitive enhancer insofar as you are dedicated to accomplishing the task at hand” (Talbot 702). Another strategy that Talbot uses to prove her argument is pathos, which is Talbot moves to specific incidents as examples of the drug’s use.
For instance, Talbot begins by portraying Alex's circumstance. She then reports that numerous understudies at different prestigious colleges utilize the same medication as Alex. BoredAt sites contain numerous presents that relate on understudy medication utilization. In reference to a post on one of these destinations Talbot states, “On the Columbia site, a poster with an e-mail address from CUNY complains that her friends take Adderall 'like candy,'” in addition to “, “I don't want to be at a disadvantage to everyone else. Is it really that dangerous?” (Talbot 702). This obviously exhibits that Alex is not a segregated occurrence. Numerous understudies are utilizing these stimulants, and the individuals who are not utilizing feel influenced to begin. Like Talbot's illustration they feel that they may fall behind in the event that they don't use the neuroenhancers. The broad utilization of this medication demonstrates not just learned people by and large that there is an issue, yet that numerous doctors are helping the issue by endorsing these drugs without a careful examination. Additionally, this infers that there is an issue with the training framework in the United States, in that it makes weight in understudies to take these solutions to accomplish at a larger
amount. Talbot then stresses the negative aspects of neuroenhancers. She then uses strong pathos about the drugs. She states, “Drugs such as Adderall can cause nervousness, headaches, sleeplessness, and decreased appetite, among other side effects. An F.D.A warning on Adderall’s label notes that ‘amphetamines have a high potential for abuse’ and can lead to dependence” (Talbot 701). By doing this she likewise speaks to her own particular validity as an author for the New York Times, which impacts the group of onlookers to acknowledge her point of. By expressing these known symptoms she plainly demonstrates that, in spite of the positive assumption of numerous clients, Adderall has numerous negative side effects. By utilizing these procedures, Talbot successfully addresses the becoming issue on non-restorative neuroenhancer utilization. Not just do her remarks support a change in the medicine of prescription, yet a disposal of unneeded weight in our general public. Societal weight for execution and profit make a need in singular's personalities for utilizing medications, and by accentuating these nonsensical convictions Talbot helps her gathering of people to acknowledge the requirement for a change.
In Carol Dweck’s article titled, “Brainology” Dweck discusses the different mindsets that students have about intelligence. Some where taught that each person had a set amount of intelligence, while others were trained that intelligence is something they could develop and increase over time. in Dweck’s article she writes, “ It is a belief that intelligence can be developed that opens students to a love of learning, a belief in the power of effort and constrictive, determined reactions to setbacks” (Dweck pg. 2). Dweck is talking about a growth mind-set in which is how students perceive the growth of knowledge and that no one person is born with a certain amount of intelligence, it too can be trained and developed over time. By introducing Dweck’s ideas of a growth mind-set to students, students will enjoy learning and be less devastated by setbacks, because they know they can develop intelligence. Dweck also writes that students with a growth mind-set, “believe that intelligence is something that can be cultivated through effort and education. They
Beautiful Brains by David Dobbs is an article about why teenagers usually take more risks than adults. In the article Dobbs begins by discussing how his son once got in trouble for speeding down a highway just because he was curious to know what it felt like. He then goes into asking why teenagers often do "stupid" things and then explains that teens have always done that throughout time. He provides scientific evidence that the brain changes between the ages of 12 to 25 affecting our decision making. One way that a reader could interpret this data is that teenagers have a hard time using new parts of their brain and seem to be in a state of retardation. Dobb also describes the reckless acts of teenagers in order for them to adapt to any situation.
In “The Brain on trial”, David Eagleman (2011) recounts the horrifying events which occurred on August 1, 1966. Charles Whitman entered the University of Texas with a rifle and secured himself in the bell tower. He then proceeded to shoot and kill 13 people and injure 32 more. Whitman was also shot and killed; however, during his autopsy it was discovered that a tumor was pressing against his amygdala. According to Eagleman, “The amygdala is involved in emotional regulation, especially of fear and aggression” (2011). Therefore, Whitman was possibly experiencing a fundamental change in his emotions and personality due to the tumor. Though Whitman did not survive, his case still poses questions as to whether or not he should be held accountable for his actions; moreover, should Whitman have received the maximum punishment for the murder he committed? Charles Whitman may not have had control over the feelings of “rage and irrational thoughts” (2011) he was experiencing; however, the precision of the attack indicates he was well aware of the actions he was committing.
Brain on Fire: My Month of Madness is a memoir by Susannah Cahalan, intended to narrate her story as she fights for both her sanity and her life. The memoir details her frequent hospital stays and is ripe with personal accounts and memories from those who were there with Cahalan through her agonizing month of insanity.
In The article “Brainology” “Carol S Dweck, a professor of psychology at Stanford University, differentiates between having a fixed and growth mindset in addition how these mindsets have a deep effect on a student’s desire to learn. Individuals who have a fixed mindset believe they are smart without putting in effort and are afraid of obstacles, lack motivation, and their focus is to appear smart.. In contrast, students with a growth mindset learn by facing obstacles and are motivated to learn. Dwecks argues that students should develop a growth mindset.
In Carol Dweck’s “Brainology” the article explains how our brain is always being altered by our experiences and knowledge during our lifespan. For this Dweck conducted a research in what students believe about their own brain and their thoughts in their intelligence. They were questioned, if intelligence was something fixed or if it could grow and change; and how this affected their motivation, learning, and academic achievements. The response to it came with different points of views, beliefs, or mindset in which created different behavior and learning tendencies. These two mindsets are call fixed and growth mindsets. In a fixed mindset, the individual believes that intelligence is something already obtain and that is it. They worry if they
Another persuasive technique we used was appealing to dramatic benefits of the post-treatment of adderall by having a student imitate exaggerated behaviors of short attention span and impulsive nature that resulted in poor grades. Then after the same student takes adderall, he portrays a completely different character and becomes very attentive and productive in his studies, which results to an A in his next assignment. This is critical in Singh’s “Not Just Naughty: 50 years of stimulant drug advertising”, as he emphasizes how drug advertisements commonly present a post-treatment normal reality of highly idealized “portrait of an ideal family—bright, at...
As far as I could remember I was never really any good at school. I couldn’t concentrate on things for no more than 5 minutes at a time I would either get discouraged or find it too easy and just give up. An author by the name of Carol Dweck wrote an article called “Brainology” in it Dweck describes that there are two types of mindsets fixed and growth. Those who are afraid to fail so they never try anything new are ones with a fixed mindset and the growth mindset are those who are not afraid to fail and find a new challenge an opportunity to learn something new. I guess you can say that I had a bit of a fixed mindset growing up I was always too scared to look stupid that I didn’t want to fail because I didn’t want to disappoint my siblings
This is said with the idea that even though Adderall is a Schedule II Substance, it doesn’t seem as dangerous or serious as heroin. A big part in the philosophy of this is because it’s extremely easy to obtain on college campuses. In an interview done by Hercampus.com, Amanda states that, “On my campus, […] Adderall is extremely easy to find. Sometimes you don’t even have to ask for it if your friends take it regularly and study with you often […] People will try to sell [Adderall] to get cash for laundry money” (Gladu 2015). Even though it’s a Schedule II drug, a nationwide survey showed that it’s only considered as “very dangerous” by two percent of students. The survey also showed that the percent of student that believe nonmedical use of Adderall is “not dangerous at all” or only “slightly dangerous” is a whopping eighty-one percent (Zadrozny 2015). In short, the students that take Adderall don’t see how it can affect them because they are getting the drug from their friend, or classmate, and not in some dark alleyway associated with the more intense
Drug in the American Society is a book written by Eric Goode. This book, as the title indicates, is about drugs in the American Society. It is especially about the misuse of most drugs, licit or illicit, such us alcohol, marijuana and more. The author wrote this book to give an explanation of the use of different drugs. He wrote a first edition and decided to write this second edition due to critic and also as he mentioned in the preface “there are several reason for these changes. First, the reality of the drug scene has changed substantially in the past dozen or so years. Second much more information has been accumulated about drug use. And third, I’m not the same person I was in 1972.”(vii). The main idea of this book is to inform readers about drugs and their reality. In the book, Goode argued that the effect of a drug is dependent on the societal context in which it is taken. Thus, in one society a particular drug may be a depressant, and in another it may be a stimulant.
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Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) is a psychiatric disorder that causes children to have problems with paying attention, trouble with following instructions, have impulsive behaviors and become easily distracted. Medications, such as Adderall and Ritalin, are used to treat the symptoms of this disorder by helping the patient to focus and pay attention while also curbing their impulsive behavior and hyperactivity. Side effects of these medications are, but not limited to, anxiety, addiction and in some cases psychosis. Proponents of giving ADHD medication to children argue that ADHD is a real disorder in children and the medication does improve the symptoms of the disorder by a large margin as well as being cost effective. Also, not only are the parents happy with the outcome of their children taking the prescribed medication but so are the children themselves. Proponents also argue that by not letting parents of the children, young adults and adults choose to take these prescriptions when diagnosed with ADHD that the medical and psychiatric communities would be in violation of the principle of autonomy. Justice as well would be violated since most of the burden of dealing with all the symptoms caused by this disorder would fall onto those with ADHD and partly on their families. Opponents of giving ADHD medication to children point out that it is not only going to children with ADHD but also being prescribed to those not diagnosed with the disorder as well as the pills being given or sold to other children and young adults. They also claim that the full side effects of ADHD medication are still not known and could have harmful long- lasting side effects on the children taking the medications. In this case, the princip...
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Many students and young people trying to leave marks on their jobs now use brain-enhancing "smart" pills to help boost their exam grades or their ability to work long hours without tiring. It's quite possible that employers will start to demand that employees use stimulants. Drugs, originally made for dementia patients and children diagnosed with ADHD, are now available without prescription. Healthy individuals use them solely to improve their memory, motivation and attention, without any prior consult with their doctors. Many of these drugs are available on the Internet which comes in handy to young people who want to save their money for the future. What they do not take into consideration when buying stimulants on the Internet is the risk of not knowing for certain what they are getting. Moreover, long-term consequences and safety of the technologies are not known. Scientists haven’t done enough research to know how much of an impact even a short period of using such substances leaves on our brains.