Analysis Of Why Parents Should Vaccinate Their Children

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Why Parents Should Vaccinate their Children: A Rhetorical Critique According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, “Public confidence in immunization is critical to sustaining and increasing vaccination coverage rates and preventing outbreaks of vaccine-preventable diseases (VPDs)” (para. 1). In recent history, there has been a significant decline in public confidence because of a variety of factors, such as vaccination does not always mean immunization, vaccines expose children to toxins, and children can build immunity naturally. The number of parents who are choosing not to vaccinate their children is growing yearly because there are certain exemptions that parents can claim, even if the vaccine is mandatory in their state. …show more content…

Before every quotation, Wallace named the speaker and their credentials that made them a reliable resource: “Tara Smith, associate professor of epidemiology at Kent State University” (para. 10). This is effective because it gives the reader Tara Smith’s credentials and explains why they should listen to her. Wallace also incorporated quotes that supported her argument from Dr. Celine Gounder, an infectious diseases and public health specialist, and Dr. Paul Offit, director of the Vaccine Education Center at the Children’s Hospital of Philadelphia and author of “Bad Medicine: When Religious Beliefs Undermine Modern Medicine.” The quotes from these professionals are effectively used because the reader knows that they can trust the different sources. This enhances Wallace’s argument by giving credibility to all of the outside resources that she …show more content…

Wallace may have fallen short of persuading readers to vaccinate their children, but recently this has been a very controversial topic. In order to make this a better article, more facts and statistics should have been used to reveal how large of an issue this really is. Overall, Wallace did a nice job of presenting her argument on why parents should vaccinate their children, but in order to make a larger impact different types of resources and references are

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