Analysis Of Edward Ayers's In The Presence Of Mine Enemies

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In Edward Ayers’ book, In The Presence of Mine Enemies, he argues how rather than being vastly different, the North and South, from 1859-1863, were actually more similar than different. Though he focuses mainly on how the two were similar, he also includes differences between the North and South as well. Ayers effectively argues his point through the use of primary sources from The Valley of the Shadow archives.
Ayers’ main source of information is The Valley of the Shadow archives. He began these archives along with various University of Virginia students. The Valley of the Shadow Project is full of documents like letters, diaries, newspapers, records, etc. from the Civil War period. These are first-hand accounts of the events from Americans living in Augusta County, Virginia and Franklin, Pennsylvania from John Brown’s raid on Harper’s Ferry leading up to the Civil War that Ayers uses in order to prove his claim that the North and South weren’t as different as believed.
The archives show how Augusta, Virginia and Franklin, Pennsylvania, and the South and North, shared many characteristics before the war, which Ayers points out well. One main point he makes when writing about their similarities is noting that both counties had people who supported slavery. Augusta, in the South, had slavery as their main economic system, and Franklin, in the North, had whites who believed in and supported slavery. There was also an abundance of racial discrimination still in the Franklin. These similarities didn’t matter much when it came to the issue of secession.
Throughout his book, Ayers proves his thesis well. He creates a compelling narrative support with evidence taken from The Valley of the Shadow archive. As explained in the previous pa...

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...irginia in his book, which makes his argument seem less credible. Leaving this out partially shatters Ayers argument. One of his main points is that both Augusta County and Franklin County are border counties, but that’s technically not true until 1863 when West Virginia was admitted as a state.
Despite Ayers’ mistakes, he makes a very good argument. He provides adequate evidence showing how the North and South were more similar than different through the Valley of the Shadow archives. The book itself was slightly difficult to follow at points due to the massive amounts of characters, but it can be argued that the inclusion of all the characters was necessary. Ayers’ book is important because it brings a new theory to the table. It’s also a unique and different way of doing so. Overall, Ayers’ evidence outweighs his mistakes and he makes a very convincing argument.

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