A Comparison of Two Poems Presents from my Aunts in Pakistan by Moniza Alvi and Search for my Tongue by Sujata Bhatt

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A Comparison of Two Poems Presents from my Aunts in Pakistan by Moniza Alvi and Search for my Tongue by Sujata Bhatt

In this essay, I will be showing you how the writers use their own

poetic devices within their work to their advantage and how the poets

have used different themes to overcome in their own poems.

To begin this essay, I will be presenting to you how Alvi and Bhatt

have used different viewpoints within their poems to put across their

message to the reader.

In the poem 'Presents from my Aunts in Pakistan', Alvi chooses to

present her work in the narrative viewpoint of the first person,

reducing the chance of her poem being a conversational one. She then

chooses to phrase her work in the past tense, so that she is getting

the reader to ponder on the characters state of mind and explore into

her past.

The poem 'Search for my Tongue' starts off in the past tense but later

converts into the present, towards the end of the poem.

Secondly, it soon becomes aware to me that, whilst comparing both

poems, the poets have used their work to portray their emotional

status' in response to almost possessing dual cultures.

In 'Presents from my Aunt in Pakistan', Alvi concentrates on cultural

dislocation, which is unquestionably the poets feelings about her

ethnic background. From quotes such as 'half-english', 'Marks &

Spencer's' and 'salwar kameez didn't impress the schoolfriend', I

begin to picture that she is caught in the middle of fashion and

popularity in England and her original, cultural traditions.

In 'Search for my Tongue', Bhatt seems to feel that she is betraying

her background by forgetting her mother tongue...

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...y felt, at some point, a loss of cultural

identity because of their longing for a traditional life.

In 'Presents from my Aunts in Pakistan', Alvi feels that she has lost

her countries attitude and view on life. She then decides to opt for a

more 'British' view on life and literally dumps her traditions.

In 'Search for my Tongue', Bhatt feels she has lost her native

qualities. Yet, she still uses Gujarati in her poem, so she obviously

still has her vernacular language.

In conclusion to this essay, 'Presents from my Aunts in Pakistan'

takes a more negative approach than 'Search for my Tongue' because it

is all about the troubles that the family faced in England, where as

'Search for my Tongue' is all about the joy of settling within a new

society but to still also remember your ethnic upbringing and

traditions.

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