Cover Letter For Admissions Essay

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Hello Mrs. Connors, I would like to deeply thank you and the admissions committee for the time spent reading the applications as well as for the offer of a position on the UChicago wait list. As it exists now, UChicago is my premier choice in universities and I would happily attend if given the chance. The same elements I first fell in love with - brilliant educators, extracurriculars so varied that quidditch is an option, and a network of alumni and systems dedicated to moulding a bright future for students - met with new ones after my interview on campus. Beyond all else, the striking architecture was the most beautiful aspect of the school, leading me to roam campus for a few hours on my own while I marveled modern sights such as the Mansueto library and their juxtaposition to older pieces, my favorite being the Gothic Joseph Bond Chapel. To demonstrate this overall continued interest, I would like to update admissions on a few achievements from the time I had sent in my application to now. Academics continue to take a strong precedence …show more content…

To begin, I was invited to attend the Augustana Honor Band as the second chair trombone in their ensemble. Following that, I successfully auditioned for a place in the SEIBA (Southeast Iowa Bandmasters Association) Honor Band as seventh chair out of a total of twelve. The privilege of attending increased my capabilities with the trombone and gave a refreshing insight into practicing. Appreciation grew, and just this last week I joined in a combo with one of our school's jazz choirs, Jazz Etc., to receive a second place prize in the state jazz choir championships. One challenge remains daunting despite the progress I have made: whether or not I will be able to play well enough to make my little brother fidget less during concerts and show the same level of interest in music as he does in the auditorium ceiling remains the

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