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Beat, battered, scraped. These words bring a strong presence in writing in general but especially in My Papa’s Waltz. Words like these used together in a piece of writing paint a very violent and in some instances, abusive tone. Authors, very much like Vincent Van Gogh who chose his brushstrokes and color precisely to convey a certain message, craft their writing and choose their words very precisely to convey the tone and meaning they wish their readers to pick up. Theodore Roethke, the author of My Papa’s Waltz, used sensory details, specific words, and events in his story to put forth a violent tone. “The whiskey on your breath could make a small boy dizzy (Roethke).” This sentence bombards the reader’s brain with sensory details. The reader can smell the sour, corrosive odor of whiskey what seeps from the father’s odiferous mouth into the innocent young child’s nostrils. Sensory details help give the reader a sense of what is going on in the story and transports them into the story, allowing the reader to feel, touch, taste, smell, and see what the characters are. A rich description such as in the lines, “The hand that held my wrist was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed, my right ear scraped the buckle.” reader can feel the hand grasping their wrist and see the bruised knuckle that holds their wrist. By the look of the bruised knuckle, the reader infers that the grasp on the wrist is tight because the bruised knuckles mean the father has been punching something or someone. The reader can also feel something or in this case a buckle scraping their ear as result of the father. The scraping sensation associated with scraping catches the child off guard and startles him, as he is not expecting it. This line al... ... middle of paper ... ... The author specifically pointed out this fact, noting its importance. That line combined with the other events in the poem draws the reader to the conclusion there is a hostile and abusive mood about the text. Roethke had very specific reasons for choosing the sensory details, specific words, and events that took place in his story to display the harsh and horrific abuse taking play in the story, which conveys the violent/ abusive tone. Authors choose their elements very carefully to portray the exact tone they wish for the reader to get out of their writing just as artists such as Van Gogh chose specific brushstrokes and images to convey a certain message to people who viewed his artwork. Authors do a fantastic job deliberately choosing what they wish their reader to pull from the story but what are they really trying to tell us beyond their calculated actions?

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