Tobias Wolff's Bullet In The Brain

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It appears that the smarter a person is, the more irritated and bored they may become with the things and people around them. Mix that with someone who is highly intelligent, bad tempered and cynical, and you might have a recipe for disaster. In Tobias Wolff’s article “Bullet in the Brain,” the author did a brilliant job using tone to show the nature and temperament of the main character named Anders. The introduction to this piece showed, right away, the type of person Anders was. The early rise in action, along with the climax, followed by the falling action was all glued together using the character’s tone. Each segment of the modified pyramid used tone, and left you wondering what Anders would do next. The article begins with Anders waiting in line at a bank. The author uses narrative distance in third-person POV, and right away we are taken into the mind of the main character who is forced to listen to the loud and stupid conversation of two women standing in front of him. A typical situation that would annoy just about anyone, but not to the point that it would put them in a “murderous temper,” such as with Anders. The introduction let the reader know that Anders, may not be mentally stable and couldn’t help but to …show more content…

Two men with guns, wearing ski masks are about to rob the bank. What started as a normal day, became a story composed of conflict and high stakes. The tone of the robbers was skillfully brought to light, and showed that this wasn’t their first crime, and that they weren’t to be messed with. One of the masked men’s eye was twitching giving the impression of imbalance. And when one of them told the teller to get her ugly ass in gear, added to the inhumane nature of these criminals. Ander’s attitude towards the situation wasn’t that of a normal person, despite the danger, his eagerness to critique was the catalyst that led to his ultimate demise. Ander’s tone, proved to be at the heart of the

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