Third Man Vs. Science Fiction By John Campbell

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In his essay, John Campbell argues that third person is better than first person in regards to Science fiction. While a sort of semblance between the two narrations styles can be reached by the narrator observing side characters, Campbell’s deals more with the main character through which the novel is being told. His argument is that “The “I” story has a strong tendency to be introspective; you get into the man’s mind, hear what he’s thinking. Now if we were a race of telepaths, that would be normal- but we aren’t.” (91). From here he goes on to his example of the keyed up man and explains how a first person novel would have to say “At that time, I was violently keyed-up” rather than expressing it by “watching” the scene (91). However, that …show more content…

He states that “the trick is to describe the horrified, not the horror, describe the love-struck, not the lady-love” when writing novels and as he points out this is difficult to do with first person (92). Since first person requires a reader to hear the thoughts of the narrator, by design the lady-love must be described rather than the love-struck. He describes this as an issue because “some like blondes, some like brunettes, and won’t agree on what constitutes perfect beauty,” but he goes on to say that the reader can agree that a person appears love struck if described the right way (92). However, the point of first person is to assume that character’s perspective so that even though a house being attacked by a giant spider might not be terrifying to the reader, but they can, through the wording, feel the fear that the narrator is feeling. In fact, having first person narration can cause the reader to be steered into a specific situation that may not happen with the free will of third person narration. This can be seen by the scene in which Kathy is cradling a pillow in Never Let Me Go. If the audience had witnessed the scene as Madame has then there could have been a million different way to interpret what was happening. Kathy herself asks Tommy “How could she have known the song had anything to do with people having babies… That was only in my head.” (73). Of course, that had not been the reason behind Madame’s crying but the issue still stand that third person narration would have allowed for this mix up while first person narration forces the reader to the same conclusion Kathy had. From the beginning of the novel they have known to read this text as if they were Kathy. Campbell makes this seem like an unnatural thing, but it is not because authors have been doing this for a long time and readers are accustomed to doing so. Actors, also, must become the character in order

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