The Safavids And The Ming Dynasties

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Sophia Foy
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The Safavids and the Ming Dynasties

I. Introductory Paragraph
A. How can two dynasties that evolved in similar eras be so different? This is a question that many historians over the years have frequently asked. As the Safavids and the Ming dynasties developed in different countries they were influenced by rituals and ways of being from either their ancestors or individuals such as a ruler or emperor.
B. In this case of the Ming Dynasty, it was a peasant named Zhu Yuanzhang and his rebel army that successfully developed a strong Dynasty for 300 years. Zhu along with his army overthrew the last emperor of the Mongols in 1368. Over the years, the Ming Dynasty took control of Korea, Mongolia and certain areas of Central and Southeast Asia (Wineburg 510). The Safavid Dynasty also dated around the same time. This Dynasty was founded by a religious group named the Safavids in the 1500’s. In the 15th century the religious group strengthened their military. The mindset of the group changed as it became more military based. When the Islamic holy war occurred, the uprising caused the Safavids to proclaim freedom and independence. The Safavid Dynasty lasted nearly 220 years (BBC Web).
C. Although the Safavids and the Ming Dynasties were similar in their view of gender relations, the differences between the two civilizations were clearly stronger as they differed in their social class systems, economic policies and political matters such government and war policies.

II. Counterargument Paragraph
A. Although the Ming and Safavid Dynasties differed in legal concepts and war diplomacy and economic policies they had similar views in gender relations.
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G. The rulers of the Ming and Safavid Dynasties strengthened their countries through careful control of their governments and military.

V. Conclusion
A. The Ming and Safavid Dynasties had great similarity in the way they viewed the female role in their dynasties however the disparities in social class systems, economic policies and political matters such government and war policies were evidently stronger.
B. Based on my evidence both the Safavid and Ming dynasties were strong and both employed their techniques in their respectful field to the best of their abilities, it’s a logical statement to say that these two dynasties contrast more than they compare.
C. Both the Safavid and Ming Dynasties had distinguished and powerful rulers who, influenced by their respective society and customs, built military and trade powerhouses.

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