Suspense and Mystery in 'The Monkey's Paw' and 'The Red Room'

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In this essay, I am going to compare ‘The Monkey’s Paw’ by W.W Jacobs with ‘The Red Room’ by H.G Wells. I am going to examine how both the writers create suspense and mystery in the stories. ‘The Monkey’s Paw’ is basically about a paw which can be used to grant wishes for its owner. In humour, the White family make their first wish without considering what had happened to the people before them, also they are ignoring that the consequences will be disastrous. ‘The Red Room’ is about a man determined to prove that there are no ghosts in Lorraine Castle. In order to do so, he had to spend the night in the red room, ultimately a once in a life time experience. The two stories are only similar in the fact that they are both of the gothic horror genres and were both set before the 20th century.

‘The Monkey’s Paw’ has a setting typical of the gothic horror genre; ‘’the night was cold and wet’’, this automatically draws the reader’s attention. This writing technique is very common when building suspense from the beginning of the story because it gains the reader’s attention then it makes the reader want to read on. Also, W.W Jacobs makes a point of setting the start of the story at night because most people are scared of the dark and the fact that they do not know what is lurking behind the darkness makes the reader ask more questions as their fear grows stronger.

The other factor that creates suspense through the setting is that the house is ‘’out-of-the-way’’. This is important because isolation is key to a horror story; this is because if you are faced with danger and you are isolated then nobody will hear your scream; nobody can help. Also the reader starts to build an image of what the place is like and this is when fear really st...

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...’. This is when the suspense starts to rise steep and quickly. The real climax of this story is when the narrator’s behaviour becomes hysterical because of the fear inside of him of his surroundings. The imagery that the narrator gives is intense and even starts to make the reader feel as though they themselves are in the room.

In both stories, the opening sentence grabs the reader’s attention and makes the reader want to read on. ‘’The Monkey’s Paw’’ first sentence contained words like ‘’night’’, ‘’cold’’ and ‘’wet’’ and ‘’The Red Room’’ opening sentence was: ‘’ it will take a very tangible ghost to frighten me’’, both of these make the reader feel eager to read on. However, tension is built in different patterns in these two stories; ‘’The Monkey’s Paw’’ has tension rising and lowering and ‘’The Red Room’’ has tension rising steadily to reach a climax at the end.

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