Suspense In Richard Mcroberts's Coming Home

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Coming Home – Richard McRoberts (pg.34-35)
1. How is suspense built up in this story?
Suspense was evoked through the deliberate utilisation of short, sharp sentences to create momentum and tension. This was evident since the commencement of the story, “Mary Irwin was coming home… It was a cold, dismal night. Mary was tired.” Furthermore, the author successfully aroused a sense of curiosity and concern within the reader through the explicitly vivid description of Mary’s fear and agitation towards the mysterious man. One prominent example of this was, “Mary screamed and fell inside the door. Panting like an animal, she cast around for something to defend herself with. Nothing. He was in the door, coming after her. She was as good as dead. It …show more content…

One significant example was when Mary contemplated on her recent encounter and attempted to scrutinise the true identity of the anonymous man. “She lay down on the sofa, and wondered who was this stranger who seemed intent on invading her private world: a rapist, a robber, some insane person who preyed on lonely women in ways she could not begin to think of?”
Moreover, uncompleted sentences and consequential statements recounting what has occurred stimulated the imagination and enabled readers to ponder about the consequences or associated feelings as an alternative to specifically expressing them and restricting the readers’ creativity or artistic visual representations. Nevertheless, foreshadowing also contributed to the inducement of suspense through the unrevealed information and gradual elucidation of clues.
2. What motifs and symbols are found in this story? Discuss how they were …show more content…

This may also indicate how time continues to progress despite the unhealed psychological wounds.
Repetition of the motif “shadowy darkness” was to apprise readers of upcoming imperilment and emphasise the prominence of Mary’s vulnerability and her meagreness of security as she was solitary at night-time whilst characterising her as a potential victim.
Furthermore, the concept of ‘coming home’ was explored throughout this story and is a central, dominating theme. This was evident through the title and constant reiteration of this phrase. Several examples include, “Mary Irwin was coming home… A couple of minutes and she would be home… Mary had come home… Life had returned to her. He had come home.” Regardless of the implementation of identical words, some of these refer to being physically at home in a fortifying and congenial atmosphere, whereas others depict the eventual and anticipated return of a long-lost son.

3. In addition to motifs and symbols, choose four language techniques used in ‘Coming Home’ and discuss their use by the

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