Pull In Your Readers With An Irresistible Plot Twist Analysis

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Deception, the act of causing someone to accept as true or valid what is false or invalid. When some authors write short stories they might incorporate deception to increase the quality of their stories. The authors would add a twist, a sense of danger or even increasing the risk to make their stories more fascinating. In Jay Bonansinga’s “And Then… Pull in Your Readers With an Irresistible Plot Twist” he gives an example of when deception is in a story and says “king of interesting, but nothing special. And then. And then. And then! You read chapter 5”(Bonansinga 1). Meaning the author is trying to hook the audience they may continue to use deception to prevail in their narratives.Which raises the question is deception is an effective storytelling …show more content…

For example in W.W. Jacobs’s short story“The Monkey's Paw,” The white family was struggling and needed help. One night they were sitting home and was visited by an Indian man who gave them a paw of a monkey that would grant 3 wishes but with a price. A reader may have some curiosity after reading this, wondering what would happen if they would use it. The family uses the paw for 200 pounds to help with a bill, but like everything this has a price. After the wish the family then loses their son in a accident at work and they will be receiving 200 pounds in compensation. Striking to the audience that a loved one would be taken away after The White Family finds a loophole in their life. The family uses the paw again to then wish for their son back alive but, Herbert was no the same as once he was. This scenario is relatable to the audience because it shows how someone will take shortcuts to reach a goal but, does not know how to face the consequences. Seeing how the family would do anything to get their son back, even wishing for his return with the same tool that might have killed him shows that they would anything to get their son back like a mother who loses a son. Moreover, deception allows an author to gain the reader’s attention. In Jay Bonansinga’s text “And Then… Pull in Your Readers With an Irresistible Plot Twist,” he analyzes a plot twist starting with a plot point. In the text Bonansinga talks s about the build up and then the twist “Kind of interesting, but nothing special. And Then. And Then You Read Chapter 5...You’re up till 4am. reading the darn thing (Bonansinga 1). He gives an example of when the story becomes very interesting and makes the reader question what’s next? It gives the audience a need to find out what’s gonna happen next or as Bonansinga would say “And Then.” An example is in “The Monkey’s paw how it starts slow and the reader is just

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