Presentation of Family Relationships in Carol Anne Duffy's Poem Before You Were Mine and in One Poem by Simon Armitage

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Presentation of Family Relationships in Carol Anne Duffy's Poem Before You Were Mine and in One Poem by Simon Armitage

In Carol Anne Duffy's poem "Before You Were Mine", Carol Anne Duffy is

the daughter looking at a photograph of her mother as a young woman,

and describing how she used to be before she was born. The poem is

written as if spoken by Carol Anne Duffy to her mother, and moves

between the present and different times in the past.

This relationship is presented as loving and affectionate by the poet,

as it paints a fond picture of a mother making sacrifices to be able

to bring her daughter up, such as going out, dancing and enjoying

herself with friends and it also celebrates the glamorous life her

mother once had, and the way the poet says "your polka-dot dress blows

round your legs. Marilyn" gives us the image of Marilyn Monroe in "the

Seven Year Itch" in the glamorous scene when her skirt is blown up by

an air vent. The mother is described as having been sparkling,

waltzing, "laughing" and "winking", before the poet was born, before

her mother belonged to her.

The poet shows us that her mother did her best, and also was able to

have fun with her daughter, after completing her responsible

"motherly" duties. This is shown in the poem by the was she teaches

her daughter dance steps, the "Cha cha cha!" on the way back from a

Church service," on the way home from Mass". This is a touching

memory, and places this poem in the past, as the cha cha cha is an

old, glamorous dance, from the mother's youth, which is rarely danced

today.

The way the poet says "I'm ten years away…" "I'm not here yet.", my

loud possessive yell", and the way she repeats "Before you were mine"

also suggests that the poet is a little guilty that her being born

forced her mother to have to give up her old life, make her stop

coming home late from ballroom dances and leave "the fizzy movie

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