Persuasive Essay On Driverless Cars

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Rebecca Schreur
Mrs. Kolp
English 11B
9 May 2014

Driverless Cars
There will be a day when driving will not require a license. Children will be traveling on their own, teens will be texting while driving, adults will be doing their jobs while driving, and the elderly who are visually or physically impaired will be able to transport themselves (Symonds). This will be made possible through new technological car advancements that will enable a car to be driverless. With technology increasing exponentially, and our everyday lives getting busier and busier, we need a solution. Weeks of productivity are lost each year by Americans (Pollette). Driverless cars will cause this issue to vanish by reducing delays and smoothing traffic flow (Winston). Most technology will have flaws, and this is also true for driverless cars’ technology. Improvements are being made to enhance the car (Pollette), but accidents will still take place. Despite the flaws, driverless cars will make trips shorter, and when trips are long, we will be able to multitask.
Ways that driverless cars will reduce delays is that they will prevent collisions (Winston), they will drive in harmony with one another, and they have the ability to maneuver around certain roads. Statistics say that the driverless cars are safer than human driving, even with their small errors (Symonds). About 1.3 million people are killed in car accidents each year (Pollette). This number will be drastically reduced since driverless cars are operated by a computer that processes information ten times per second, which is faster than human comprehension, and is sourced from surrounding cars and roads (Winston). These cars can communicate to each other to reduce traffic jams (Symonds). Driverless c...

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...Point # 4 – Topic Sentence – Clear
A big concern is about the transition between robot mode to human mode (Pollette).
Google Chauffeur alerts human driver about situations where the human needs to drive, like a toll booth or merge (Pollette).
Improvements are still being made to enhance the car (Pollette).
An improvements may include the robot to take over when the driver dozes off. (Pollette).

Supporting idea/fact
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So what? Significance of facts presented. Wrap up paragraph.

Conclusion
Weeks of productivity are lost each year by Americans (Pollette).
Summarize Main Points

Driverless cars have 360 degree monitoring and have the potential to save billions of dollars and thousands of lives (Brown).

Draw a Conclusion – What does all this mean? Summary or reflection ideas.
End Memorably – full circle, quote, call to action

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