Persuasive Essay

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Is climbing as safe as driving a car or riding a motorcycle? Humans have been climbing for upwards of a thousand years, but many people still see it as a life-threateningactivity to participate in. Humans have been driving and riding motorcycles for a far less amount of time, yet it isn’t seen as a life-threatening thing to do. So, if climbers can decrease the number of mistakes they commit, then climbing can be made far safer. Accidents are most often caused by human error. Climbers often forget to stay up to date on the weather, and also can get unfocused then make very simple mistakes. In total, climbing can be very exciting and fun activity for anyone, if they do it properly and stay safe.
Staying up to date on the weather and prepared …show more content…

Firstly, in a news article written by William Plummer said, “Winds ripped the air at 60 mph. The windchill factor dropped to 50 degrees below zero. Visibility was one foot. It began to snow”. This article is describing in detail what the weather was like the day that a bunch of kids from a Portland school went climbing on Mt. Hood. None of them were prepared, which sadly cost many of them their lives. Climbers do not have the power to control the weather, but they can take precautions to be safe. They should always double check the weather and make sure that they have the correct gear for the weather to help them stay safe. Weather can affect many things so it’s very crucial that climbers stay prepared. Secondly, according to the data gathered by the AAC and which was published in Accidents in North American Mountaineering, 7% of immediate causes in U.S. Mountaineering accidents is “falling rock, ice, or object”. This data shows that a pretty good sized portion of accidents is caused by falling objects such as rocks and ice. Mountains are always eroding, which causes rocks and other things fall and they can hit the climbers and seriously injure them. There is an excess of gear to help climbers, but there isn’t any gear that can stop gravity and keep things from falling on them, which on a side note would be so cool. It’s crucial that climbers wear proper protection like helmets so in the instance that something does fall on them, they won’t get severely hurt. Thirdly, in the video by Jonathan Barrett, Andrew Ault said, “That to me also accentuates sort of the environmental dangers that are there which are certain things that you can’t really control like what size chunk of ice is going to come off when you swing your ax” (Barrett). Andrew Barnes is elaborating on the fact that climbers can’t actually control

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