Personal Narrative-America The Beautiful

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My feet are sore from rushed reps, and the sun is beating down on my back as I spin the routine for “America the Beautiful” for the umpteenth time. Mr. Rice had no sympathy despite this being the last day of band camp. The longer that I spent marching circles around the school, the more nervous I was about running out of time. It wasn't necessarily anybody's fault that the clock was ticking down, and that I was afraid of losing everything. The metronome beat endlessly, speeding up as if it wanted rest as much as we did. There is only a few hours remaining of this seemingly endless week. We had already knocked out seven of the thirteen hours of practice today, and it was bittersweet to think about how near the end was. As we got back around to the practice field, the sun had begun to set, casting its symphony of colors across the sky. I was so caught up in the moment that I had missed the dismissal for dinner. I caught Aniya first, doing my best to jog up to her with my flag poles in hand. She gave me a smile that didn't quite reach her eyes. …show more content…

During the last two weeks we had spent together, I had begun to view her as a role model. I had never met someone so passionate about their craft; her dedication fueled the entire guard to work their hardest. I could tell that this was a hard time for her, whether she continued color guard into college or not. It would be hard for me to watch her go and not be able to do anything about

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