Assignment 1
Our Time [Weidman] In the essay Our Time, John Edgar Wideman starts of the essay basically describing how he grew up and what it was like. Throughout the writing Wideman tells us the story of his brother through his eyes and uses many different voices and points of view. He struggles sometimes in the story with writing the piece because he has to be careful what to say and how he should state things so that people can see it through his Brother Robby’s eyes and not just hear what they want. This essay doesn’t have just one person speaking at a time it has many characters and at times Wideman seems like he is writing a narrative, while critiquing himself. In the story Wideman does a very good job and his critiques seem to really stand out and make sense. My
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Although some might object that he does these things and makes the story hard to read, I would reply that the way he uses the other character’s voices makes the story more interesting. This issue is important because having his own critiques, while also talking for his brother Robby makes the story interesting. There is one part of the story, that is said by Robby which uses this well “Wind blowing snow all up in my face. Thought I’s bout to die out there. Even the junkies and dealers inside today” (Wideman 455) This quote show how Wideman uses Robby’s voice to start off a story which helps tell the story better, rather explaining it for himself. While some might argue this essay is about Wideman trying to explain his brother’s troubles and showing how bad his life may be, I think this essay is more about how Wideman uses different perspectives to tell the story of his brother. The issue with this is that the people trying to read this essay would say it is hard to follow or it is not a complete story because of the many perspectives he moves around in throughout the story. This is shown by quotes throughout the story and there are many reasons why I believe this
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11. Through the shift from first to third person and vice versa the technique strengthens his essay. With Gould’s usage of nouns and pronouns which refer to himself, the audience's attention is directed to that idea or concept. Provided that the essay had instead just been in third person, the monotony would have been too overbearing to target and decipher the real purpose. Using first person adds in his personal aspect about this research, ultimately making him seem more relatable and understanding, instead of just the
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Moreover, Wideman ends up having difficulties trying to represents what his brother is “saying” because he ends up writing his own personal opinions and thoughts. Although it was something he was trying to avoid considering it would be a manipulation of the story. Throughout the essay, the reader can observe how Wideman analyzes his past experiences with Robby, and how their relationship has transformed over the years. For instance, the author conveys the bonds he had with his brother in order to express that after all this years they still shared “common history, values, and style developed within the tall stockade of family, and that was enough to make us care about each other” (Wideman 674). In addition, he tells the reader how he wanted Robby to know that he was thinking about “Our shared roots and destiny” (Wideman 674) and how that thinking was getting him closer to Robby.
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Wideman’s writing is uniquely phrased. It changes voices along the way to explore different sides and perspectives, leaving the readers wondering about basic concepts. When I finished reading “Our Time” I was confused about a lot of its aspects. Because Robby is displayed as the main protagonist as well as the main antagonist of the story, I was confused about Robby’s standings. Is Robby a criminal or a victim? What was John trying to say when he shared this story? Can someone be a criminal and a victim at the same time?
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In Bruce Sterling’s “We See Things Differently” contains imagery of stereotypes, he portrays stereotypes throughout this short passage using religion, sex, and race. For example, the image of the American women throughout the story is portrayed as sluts. As well as the Muslim women that being portrayed to be in bondage. These are just one of the many examples of stereotypes throughout the story. One person does not prove a stereotype of a sex, gender or religion to be true because of that person's actions or beliefs. Even though the end of the story contradicts with my statement not everyone will steal an identity to hide that fact that they are
One of his intriguing skills as a writer is his ability to intertwine narration and analysis in his essays. James Baldwin mixes narration and analysis in his essays so well that coherence is never broken, and the subconscious is so tempted to agree with and relate to what he says, that if you don’t pay close attention, one will find himself agreeing with Baldwin, when he wasn’t even aware Baldwin was making a point. Physical placement of analytical arguments and analytical transitions, frequency and size of analytical arguments, and the language used within the analytical arguments are the keys to Baldwin’s graceful persuasion. Throughout this essay, I will be using Baldwin’s “Notes of a Native Son” as an example. “Notes of a Native Son” is an essay that Baldwin wrote which focuses primarily on his life around the time his father died, which also happens to be the same time his youngest brother was born.
The dialogue a narrator uses with characters in a short story reflects on how the story is being understood by the reader. A character’s dialogue is assumed to be controlled by the author, and then the reader comprehends the dialogue through different points of view in which is told by a narrator. Which point of view the author uses can change how the reader may understand the story. Understanding a story is not just based off the ability to comprehend the plot, setting, characters, and theme. But importantly, understanding what point of view the narrator is in and whether the narrator has dialogue with characters within the story is important. The short story “Lusus Naturae”, written by Margaret Atwood, it’s a short story told by a first person narrator who is a main character in the story but has very minimum dialogue with the other characters. Another short story, “Sonny’s Blues”, written by James Baldwin, is
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