Monster Descriptive Writing

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When I was little, I thought monsters lingered in the dark, lurking under beds, in closets and the basement. As time went by I learned at a young age that the worst monsters take refuge in people; the best way to harm someone. I was always told that fathers are the protectors, the heroes. That’s why I was baffled when the meanest monster of all lived inside my father, like a hate filled parasite. This realization hit me like a ton of bricks, especially when it was on what is supposed to be one of the happiest days of the year, Christmas Eve. Christmas break at grandma B’s house was my favorite time of year, the house taken over by the smell of peppermint bark and sweet apple cider. And every inch of the counters covered in flour, sugar and frosting from little kids, my sister and I, trying to make sugar cookies. With dark green frosting, resembling to our Christmas tree, covering our hands we go to wash them. Once my hands were sparkling clean I go to sit in front of the porch window counting every snowflake that elegantly fell to the ground. Minutes later a knock at …show more content…

Slowly looking up into his eyes, I noticed those weren’t his. He had been completely taken over, his once loving brown eyes were now black with rage. Like a demonic entity was looking through his eyes at me. They were so cold that you could be left standing like a deer in headlights. The grip on my wrist was like a python killing its prey, increasingly getting tighter, making my arm tingle like static electricity. Somehow this bug is controlling my father with a tiny remote, giving him super strength. At this point I didn’t know what he was saying. I was concentrating on the pain on my wrist and the ringing in my ears from all the yelling. Knowing my mom was out of town for work I still screamed for her hoping she’d save me. Finally, the door was opened and the monster threw me out of the way like a rag

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