“A Man Walks by with a Loaf of Bread on his Shoulder” or “Un Hombre pasa con un Pan al Hombro” is a poem by Cesar Vallejo written in November of the year 1937. Cesar Vallejo was a Peruvian poet who mainly wrote profound poems about the human suffering, and was known to write free verse poems. This poem was published after the death of Vallejo in 1939 in a book titled, “Human Poems,” which was a collection of Vallejo’s later poems from 1931-1938. In, “A Man Walks by with a Loaf of Bread on His Shoulder,” Vallejo criticizes philosophical academia for being detached from humankind’s harsh reality by sarcastically presenting rhetorical questions after describing humans’ problems. Vallejo utilizes the form of free verse in this poem. He uses free verse to go beyond the constraints of usual structures and forms to express his point of view on the hardships of the world, without regards to the “beauty” of the poem. This poem consists of thirteen non-rhyming couplets, each being identical in structure. This poem is without rhyme because Vallejo wants the content to be perceived as deeper than a rhyme scheme. Rather than writing poems for the art form and beauty of it, Vallejo often writes to bring attention to human suffering and problems in the world …show more content…
that he observes. From his perspective, Vallejo believes that literature must have a commitment to the deeper aspects of life and not focus on beauty itself. His observations are images of the external world that list several social aspects that concern him. Hunger, poverty, illness, violence and unconcern for thy neighbor are some of the main concepts presented in this poem. In contrast, the second verses contain a reflection on poetry and philosophy, thus categorizing this literary work as a metapoem. Vallejo expresses his interest in philosophy by mentioning Socrates and André Breton, the main founder of surrealism. He also expresses this interest by other themes of philosophy like the infinity, the fourth dimension, "the I," "the trope and the metaphor," Picasso, and the "beyond." However, he starts by presenting examples of human suffering in each first line. The first line of each couplet refers to the refers to suffering in the real, everyday world; and the second line of each couplet refers to a more intellectual world. An observation about suffering in the real word is made in the first line of each couplet, followed by a rhetorical question. There is a violent contrast between the first and second lines, as the rhetorical question presented in each couplet produces an antithesis between the two concepts. The use of metaphors in this poem represent the different kinds of pain and suffering that the author observes in his everyday world. The metaphors presented in this poem represent hunger, filth, misery, illness, death, corruption, and pain. A Man Walks by with a Loaf of Bread on His Shoulder” starts out with the lines, “A man passes with a loaf of bread on his shoulder / After that, am I going to write about my double?” In these lines, the author is observing everyday life, and then contrasts it by asking how he can do something as trivial as writing about his double. Vallejo is also making a statement about suffering, and is representing hunger in the first couplet. He then observes a man killing a louse, “Another sits and scratches, finds a louse and kills it / What’s the point of discussing psychoanalysis then?” The author is representing filth and misery by this line, and is making a point that academics and higher thinking are extremely distant from the world we live in and its problems. The next couplet is also a representation of misery, as the author says, “Another has entered my chest, club in hand / Shall I talk Socrates to the doctor?” Vallejo is using heavy sarcasm in the second line of the couplet, implying that knowledge of philosophy and higher thinking will not help one in times of hardship or illness. Each couplet is presented in the same way, and each criticizes higher academics. One line that stands out is, “A bricklayer falls off the roof and dies, no longer eats lunch.
/ Innovate the trope, the metaphor?” In this stanza, Vallejo is using poetry to talk about poetry, which brings about aspects of a metapoem. In the first line, he brings to attention a hard-working laborer that obviously was working in dangerous conditions since he fell off the roof. By making this observation, Vallejo is making a comment on the dangerous workforce in Latin America and the disconcern people have for it. In the second line, Vallejo is asking the rhetorical question of why we should innovate the trope or the metaphor, when we should be more concerned with innovating the dangerous workforce and our concern for
another. The rhetorical question present in the second verse of each stanza contradicts the first verse, creating an antithesis between the two concepts. The lexical chain is constructed from concepts that are significant to the academic and artistic world of literature. Concepts that are presented in this poem are psychoanalysis and philosophy, double, metaphor, theater, Socrates, Picasso, Breton, metaphor, etc. Two semantic axes are constituted, one by the everyday world and the second by the intellectual world. In this opposition, the lyrical self is located as a member of the second world and from there it displays its intentions, which are to criticize academicism for the distance that it establishes between the world and its problems. The contrast between observations and their reflections, and the question of what value to speak of the non-self without giving a cry, explicitly communicates how unjust it is to think of the enrichment of his intellect while his neighbor barely subsists.
The essence of this poem is the author’s mastery of sound and rhythm and his excellent use of figurative language. Richard Wilbur purposely chose words that have few a syllables and require little to no change in mouth size and tongue movements to appease to the reader when read aloud. There is an ABAB rhythm scheme
When I read poetry, I often tend to look first at its meaning and second at how it is written, or its form. The mistake I make when I do this is in assuming that the two are separate, when, in fact, often the meaning of poetry is supported or even defined by its form. I will discuss two poems that embody this close connection between meaning and form in their central use of imagery and repetition. One is a tribute to Janis Joplin, written in 1983 by Alice Fulton, entitled “You Can’t Rhumboogie in a Ball and Chain.” The second is a section from Walt Whitman’s 1,336-line masterpiece, “Song of Myself,” first published in 1855. The imagery in each poem differs in purpose and effect, and the rhythms, though created through repetition in both poems, are quite different as well. As I reach the end of each poem, however, I am left with a powerful human presence lingering in the words. In Fulton’s poem, that presence is the live-hard-and-die-young Janis Joplin; in Whitman’s poem, the presence created is an aspect of the poet himself.
The first poem entitled “Poetry” by Nikki Giovanni was discussing the purpose of poets trying to compose poetry. The author is speaking. She says that the main purpose of all poetry is to show that life is precious. She says that all poetry should sing, be joyful, and inform the reader. This poem flows easily as it is read but does not rhyme like a lot of poetry. There is repetition of phrases like “It never says…” and it also uses good imagery in the form of similes like “…motion graceful as a swan…” (cite poem p.345).
The verbose use of imagery in this poem is really what makes everything flow in this poem. As this poem is written in open form, the imagery of this writing is what makes this poem poetic and stand out to you. Marisa de los Santos begins her poem with “Its here in a student’s journal, a blue confession in smudged, erasable ink: ‘I can’t stop hoping/ I’ll wake up, suddenly beautiful’” (1-3). Even from the first lines of this story you can already picture this young girl sitting at her desk, doodling on her college ruled paper. It automatically hooks you into the poem, delving deeper and deeper as she goes along. She entices you into reading more as she writes, daring you to imagine the most perfect woman in the world, “cobalt-eyed, hair puddling/ like cognac,” (5-6). This may not be the ideal image of every person, but from the inten...
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...s poems publication. In `A un olmo seco', we discover references to the cemetery of Leonor's grave, and the beauty of new shoots set against the decay of the `olmo's' trunk, which evokes Machado's young wifr in her terminal condition. `A un olmo seco' is highlights the central theme of landscape and countryside, and through the physical description, Machado remembers his personal experience in Soria. The river Duero acts as a leitmotif for the cemetery where his wife was buried. In `Caminos' as Machado develops the theme of his displacement in Baeza, his mood is finally attributed to the loss of his wife. Landscape can be linked with inner emotional landscape. The landscape in this poem is ominous, violent and inflexible: "hendido por el rayo." Therefore, landscape acts as a way of revealing inner emotion and Spanish National character throughout the collection.
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679). When reading this line, I picture times when I too cried out in vein, a cleansing relief from everyday strain and hardship. Suarez’s use of this particular event in the boy’s memory, I feel, connects the reader more deeply to the young boy. The third crucial example of imagery, I believe is when the mother storms in the boys room after he lashes out, throwing his pillows in anger. This verse causes us, the readers, to reconnect to the young boy’s age and
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