Lucille Fletcher's 'The Hitchhiker'

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Strange noises, eerie strangers, and phantasms are things that often pull an audience into a suspenseful story. In Lucille Fletcher’s “The Hitchhiker” a man is driving from his home in Brooklyn to the west coast. Along the way he continues to see a man who makes him nervous. Eventually, this vision makes him question his sanity. “The Hitchhiker” is a good story because of the elements of plot. First off, Fletcher begins her good play through the exposition and rising action. She starts the exposition by having the main character, Ronald Adams, address the audience and tell them that he is not insane. Adams says, “I am not mad now.” (Hitchhiker 1001) Why would Adams need to say he’s not mad. Would a sane person have to press the issue the he/she …show more content…

The evidence states, “I had a feeling that if only I could speak to someone familiar, someone I loved, I could pull myself together.” (Hitchhiker 1010) He calls his mother only to have another woman answer the phone. Her name was Mrs. Whitney. She answered the phone and breaks the bad news to him. He repeatedly tells her he is her son, he is Adams, but she seemed to ignore him when he was giving that information. She tells him that his mother is in the hospital. She also tells him it because the death of her oldest son. He was the oldest son. The evidence states also states, “It’s all taken place since the death of her oldest son, Ronald.” (Hitchhiker 1011) He found out he was dead through those words. Adams repeats what Mrs. Whitney say in shock by saying, “The death of her oldest son, Ronald…? Hey-what is this? What number is this?” (Hitchhiker 1011) Climax would be correct for this. The stories suspicion and action reached its highest …show more content…

The fall from climax in my eyes, happens when the operator tells Adams his three minutes are up. I say this because it created a disturbance in his conversation that cuts him of and realizes where he is in life. The operator say, “Your three minutes are up, sir.” (Hitchhiker 1011) I think he accepts that he is dead. When he takes a moment to start thinking. Adams states, “I am trying to think. I am trying to get hold of myself. Otherwise I shall go mad…” (Hitchhiker 1011) You wonder, why would that be falling action? It’s falling action because he hasn’t mentioned anything else about his mother being in the hospital nor did he bring up his death. My last Example for falling action would be that Adams knows he will see the man again and find out who he is. He also hopes to find himself. Adams states, “Somewhere among them, he is waiting for me. Somewhere I shall know who he is, and who...I...am....” (Hitchhiker 1011) Everything is settled down. Even though this could have been another rising action into more

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