In Limbo, by Edward Brathwaite, I feel that there are numerous ways to

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In Limbo, by Edward Brathwaite, I feel that there are numerous ways to

look at the story.

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In 'Limbo', by Edward Brathwaite, I feel that there are numerous ways

to look at the story. One idea is that the poem is a journey, most

likely on a slave ship. We know this due to the references like "and

the dark deck is slavery". If you were onboard a slave ship, and you

were a slave, you would be placed underneath, on the lowest deck… with

no lights or window. This lets in very little light, creating the

dark. I recognize we are on a ship due to a lot of aspects. We know

there is a boat, due to lines eleven and sixteen. "And the ship like

it ready", "long dark deck and the water surrounding me". I think the

poet has pointed out this out to let readers know this is a journey.

In line 40, the poet mentions "sun coming up". I believe this to be

the end of the person's journey because - it is near the end of the

poem, and it could be symbolized to show that he is coming out of the

dark journey. I also can see how "down down down" is the layers of the

slave ship, and the person is coming out up out of the slave deck.

The "down down down" bit also links with another theory that the poem

is about a limbo dancer. If we start from the beginning, "limbo

stick..in front of me" is a great line to start on because you can

create an image in your mind of this person standing in front of the

silence, pondering over the limbo stick. Line seven also works with

this. The "long dark night" may be the person preparing his mind for

the state of nothing that lays ahead - Limbo. Limbo is supposedly the

state of nothingness between heaven and hell. In limbo you can feel

nothing. Maybe the dancer is getting ready to commit...

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...rrounding me" - they seem to make

a separate story by themselves. I think the poet has done this to

basically sum up the poem, and he has based the poem on these lines.

These lines are the punch lines. With them we can see basically what

the person goes through, in simple format with out knowing the exact

details. The refrain is easy to remember, this has the effect that we

keep in in our minds - the poet keeps reminding us that he is always

in limbo (the state of nothingness AND/OR a limbo dance)

The poem is quite serious as it deals with society and culture. At the

end of the day, and after careful studying, I find that the point

Brathwaite is trying to make is that, even though the people are

trapped on the ships, they must find a way to get out of the state of

limbo which they probably encounter most of the time. This way out is

through a Limbo dance.

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