Home Grown Violence Evaluation Essay

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An Evaluation of Home Grown Violence So to start things off I would like to make a statement, for many reason still some unknown to myself I am a very average person. Just for example in high school I played football, but in all honesty a majority of high school students play at least one sport. I started off my freshman year weighing in at 220 pounds and a lineman. However, over the years I lost weight and improved my speed making me into an all around decent player. Looking back now I realize that none of that happened over night, much of it happened through multiple years of hard training and dedication. Similar to that is English, I started out this year honestly not know how to write very well. Furthermore, not knowing very much about the grammar aspect of the language. But now I would not say I am an amazing writer, I would not even go so far as to say I am a good write. I am very much so a decent or average writer, constantly learning from my mistakes and trying to improve upon them. Firstly, I would like to begin with the items that I did not catch in my last paper "Home …show more content…

One thing that I did well was my introduction and conclusion. I thought I did an excellent job opening my ‘Home Grown Violence’ paper by including the story about my past. Possibly if I did not mess up the tense a couple of times it would have been more powerful. But alas I shall no dwell on that this much of my paper is to be about what I have done well. As to my conclusion the quote placed in the very last sentence helped to reinforce the overarching evil of domestic violence. So my reasons for putting it very last should be obvious, because saying that finding violence in family’s should be the last place we find it; moreover, saying that it really sticks with a person and makes them think about what was

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