Descriptive Writing Ocean

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I am in the middle of an ocean. I don't know how I got here, or who I even am. I am on a small boat, wearing tattered clothing. I am covered in cuts bruises and I feel sick to my stomach. It is freezing and I am soaking wet. There is blood on me and I am so thirsty.... I am surrounded by 343,423,668,428,484,681,262 gallons of water in all the oceans, with not a drop to drink. Somehow I can't bring myself to know what that number even is.... The winds are picking up, and I have just realized how skinny and frail I am. I can hardly move. I can barely breathe. I realize my starving battered self is too far gone. I lie on the small boat slipping in and out of consciousness. I can feel the waves crash on the boat. I'm too far gone to care. Somewhere in between closing my eyes and losing my senses forever, I feel myself be swept by a wave into the ocean and fall through cold, dark, nothingness.... …show more content…

I felt like there was a weight on my chest, making it difficult to breathe. Oddly enough, even though I still felt like I was underwater, I was warm. My eyes fluttered open only to snap shut again. I must be dead, because there is no way I am living. I specifically remember drowning. Then why was there a man on me hitting my chest? Ow. That really hurt, Ow. Stop it !! There are bruises there !! I then realized I wasn't speaking at all. There was still water in my lungs. I couldn't breathe. Suddenly I could hear the voice, I presume belonging to the

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