' Dear Privileged, And Meritocracy Is A Book, By Briana Payton

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In May 2014, Time.com published an article that would soon become the source of no small amount of social contention (1). In the article, “Dear Privileged-at-Princeton: You. Are. Privileged. And Meritocracy Is a Myth,” author Briana Payton lashes out at classmate Tal Fortgang for an article he wrote a month prior (1). Payton, a freshman studying sociology at Princeton University and the political antithesis of Fortgang, takes issue with her classmates’ definition of the word “privilege” (1). She argues that, because Fortgang is white, society inherently affords him “privilege” (Payton 1). Payton’s main flaw is her tone — her condescending, demeaning, and arrogant rhetoric distracts from her content and diminishes her credibility. Conversely, …show more content…

When Payton says, “Is that clear? You. Are. Privileged. It is OK to admit that,” her use of rhetorical questions, punctuation, and capitalization make her intentions abundantly clear (3). Payton’s statement exudes anger and resentment towards Fortgang. In the question, it is clear that Payton does not want an answer but rather, is attempting to scold Fortgang. Moreover, her use of punctuation speaks volumes; periods after each word are the equivalent of Payton raising her voice, out of frustration, to drive home a point. Even her emphasis of the word, “OK” is a sarcastic way of suggesting that Fortgang knows, and is afraid to admit, that he is privileged …show more content…

Payton’s reference to Fortgang’s, “comments…about welfare” and the Zimmerman verdict are unrelated, unwarranted, and ad hominem at best (3). What do either of these things have to do with checking privilege? The simple answer is, not very much. It seems fallacious for Payton to skirt Fortgang’s claims by responding with these types of personal attacks. No level of academia, barring elementary school, would consider this form of refutation to be respectful. It seems that Payton used this attack as a safety valve: if the reader didn’t agree with her analysis, maybe she could still dissuade the reader from agreeing with

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