50-500-500 Essay
Ricardo Roman
AP English III
9/24/15
In the ''Los Angeles Notebook'' by Joan Didion describes the Santa Ana's wind and its effect by emphasizing the wind's ability to change human behavior before during and after the winds presents, Didion does this by demonstrating supporting detail and imagery. Didion also expresses all of her ideas in first person view and in the present tense. Didion supports an eerie, ominous and dark mood by presenting it with strong imagery and detail, by stating ''My only neighbor would not come out of her house'' and ''Her husband roamed the place with a machete''. Didion also demonstrates personal recollection to assist with the eerie, ominous, and dark mood by stating ''The Indians will throw themselves into the sea with the bad wind blow.'' Didion references other cultures by comparing the Santa Ana winds to the foehn wind. The Santa Ana winds or the foehn wind can dramatically change people's behavior and causes people to commit crimes and suicide. Didion supports this by stating ''in Switzerland the suicide rates goes up during the
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foehn'' this also support the eerie, ominous and dark mood that Didion wants to support through out the story. Didion demonstrates personification throughout the essay to illustrate how the Santa Ana winds can invade Los Angeles and change peoples behaviors with an over cast of evil and negativity.
Didion first personifies the Santa Ana winds as a negative, and evil force of nature “ There is something uneasy in the Los Angeles air this afternoon, some unnatural stillness, some tension”. When Didion explains that the air has unnatural stillness and tension, it paints the picture of the impending end for Los Angeles by giving the Santa Ana winds some adjectives that describes the wind which creates character for the wind. Didion establishes personification throughout her story, in order to create a increasing sense of danger which amplifies the mood . Each personification shown gives the Santa Ana wind different human like characteristics to make it seem alive than just a simple
wind. Didion wrote the ''Los Angeles Notebook'' in present tense and first person point of view to create a continuous mood. She also demonstrates references to other cultures such as when she proposes the idea of the Santa Ana winds as a foehn wind of Austria and Switzerland and the khamsin of Israel. Didion also shows personal recollection when she points to and example in Raymond Chandler's exert. Didion also presents parallelism within short sentences that was constructed with concrete nouns such as ''I could see why.'', ''we know it because we feel it.'' and ''The baby frets, and the maid sulks.'' Didion uses visual imagery and adjectives that intensify the Santa Ana winds and its ability to change human behavior. Although Didion’s story presents such a grim topic, Didion is able to illustrate and demonstrate her point so well that it creates a feeling of its first-hand experience. With all of these examples of imagery, personification, personal recollection, parallelism, and concrete nouns that Didion presents creates a eerie, ominous and dark mood.
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Joan Didion uses words such as ‘eerie’, ‘depression’, and ‘unnatural’ bringing an unsettling and serious tone. Didion reflects this uneasiness on the people and how as Santa Ana nears, it affects them. “I have neither heard, nor read that a Santa Ana is due, but I know it, and almost everyone I have seen today knows it too. We know it because we feel it. The baby frets. The maid sulks (Didion).” As Santa Ana looms closer the people living in the area get a strange sensation, almost self preparing themselves for the worst. Linda Thomas however describes the atmosphere in a different light. Thomas uses words such as ‘undisturbed’, ‘undamaged’, and ‘natural’ bringing a more casual and normalized tone. “I awoke to air so dry that the graze of my nightgown against the down comforter created tiny orange sparks… And as I make the drive to work, I find myself beneath a smoky sky the color of fire (Thomas).” The self knowing that Santa Ana is there, just like with Didion, but there is no strange feeling present. It is almost as if the presence of Santa Ana is not bothering and
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The Santa Ana winds cause people to act more violently or unruly and makes others irritable and unhappy to a great extent. Joan Didion explains to the reader about how the Santa Ana affects human behavior in her essay “Los Angeles Notebook.” Through the use of imagery, diction, and selection of detail Didion expresses her view of the Santa Ana winds.
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