Afternoons by Philip Larkin

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Afternoons by Philip Larkin.

A poem which reflects on the subject of marriage is 'Afternoons' by

Philip Larkin. The poem deals with Larkin's view on young mothers

watching their kids playing in a playground and on this he concludes

that marrying young and having children young, lead to the mothers

losing their identity and destiny. The techniques used by the poet

such as theme, imagery and tone deepened my understanding of the

issue.

The structure of the poem is simple; there are three stanzas with

eight lines in each. However, unlike every other poem by Larkin this

layout has no direct meaning. The lines are unrhymed. The first stanza

deals with Larkin's rather cynical view of marriage and deals with the

idea that the young mothers are isolated. Larkin's brilliant use of

language emphasis the recurring theme of emptiness within the young

mothers and how regimented their lives have become; 'In the hollows of

afternoons' and 'young mothers assemble'. In the second stanza Larkin

moves from the general view into the individual and describes the

mother as belonging to a middle class background. Their husbands are

described as working in 'skilled trades' and being 'behind them'. The

husbands are not literally standing behind the women but are

metaphorically. They provide support financially, emotionally and

phycologically. On a closer inspection of the poem we realise Larkin

has taken an everyday situation and made a universal message out of

it.

The image of the mothers life being dull is further emphasised when

Larkin describes the 'Wedding Album' being near the television. This

image suggests that the televsion is more of a central concern in the

couples lives rather than their marriage vows etc. ...

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...heir identity and are dominated by

responsibility, they have lost control of what is truly their own.

'something is pushing them to the side of their lives'.

The poem 'Afternoons' by Philip Larkin made me think considerably

about having children young especially at my age, 17. The idea that

Larkin portrays, that young parents, in particular young mothers lose

control of their lives as soon as they have a child. Personally I

believe that Larkin's message is made more effective and memorable

because he tells it in a very simplistic manner in which the reader

can clearly understand. However, Larkin likes the reader to be

challenged and tells his ideas via a very implicit manner. His use of

theme, imagery and tone deepened my understanding of the issue and I

believe the poem provides a great thinking point to any young

teenagers considering having children.

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