Abby

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On a bright Saturday morning that began just like any other, I bolted upright in my bed and grinned at the sunlight streaming through the half-closed blinds. I paused briefly to stretch and then leaped out of bed. After making a quick stop to brush my teeth, I sprinted down the stairs, barely managing to stick the landing at the bottom. Swinging around the banister like a rod on an axle (-simile), I slip into the kitchen on my socks and skidded to a stop next to my mom.

“Good morning!” I sang.

After a quick glance at the clock, she replied, “Good morning sweetie… You’re up early this morning.” (-dialogue)

I nodded vigorously and held up seven fingers to emphasize my point. Suddenly, a furious scratching, whining “woof!” (-onomatopoeia) sounded from the second floor. I glanced upward and shot a sideways frown at my mom as I began to slowly retreat from the room. She gave me a pointed look, and I hung my head as I trudged back to get the silver metal bowl my mom was holding out for me. (-compound sentence) I stared at it dejectedly, my happy spirits draining away, and attempted my best puppy dog face along with a, “But mooooooooooom… I fed the dog yesterday!” (-dialogue)

She replied, “Well you could always ask your sister to do it,” with a smug look of triumph.

I immediately caved due to the horrifying prospect of my only alternative: waking my teenage sister at seven a.m. to feed her dog (-irony). I shuddered. (-simple sentence)

So I prepared Abby’s food and some of my cheer seeped back as I danced around the kitchen.

My dad trumped down the stairs about five minutes later with a thunderous, “Good morning, Leah Bug!” (-dialogue) I flashed a dazzling smile in response and continued my work.

After I finished, I set the bowl next to a newly filled bowl of water and with one last look at my parents, hiked up the stairs to release the beast (-hyperbole).

Abby always slept in my sister, Emily’s, bedroom and since she did not have food, water, or the bathroom all night, she was one happy camper when she was finally released in the morning. (-complex sentence)

I cleared the top of the step and paused for a moment with my hand on the doorknob and a strong sense of foreboding. I braced myself, threw open the door, and dashed to the stairs.

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