The poems I am comparing in this essay are Half-past two and

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The poems I am comparing in this essay are Half-past two and

Reports by U.A. Fanthorpe and Leaving school by Hugo Williams.

All three of the poems are about school, and about the different

aspects of it. There are several points of view expressed in the

poems, such as that of a teacher, the confusion of a child starting

boarding school, and a child who cannot tell the time.

In the poem 'Half-past two', the poem tells of a child who, after

being told off as been told to stay inside until half-past two and

then he can go. To the dismay and confusion of the child, he cannot

tell the time and so wonders what to do when and if, half-past two

ever came. In this poem, the style is very much that of a child

speaking firsthand to himself and thinking in his head. The poem

begins with 'Once upon a' which is a harsh cliché of old fairytales

of which the majority of them started in this way. In the first

paragraph, as he is so young he did 'something very wrong' but then

carries on to say that he had forgotten what it was that he had done

to deserve his punishment.

At the end of the lines in the first verse, there is no punctuation so

that the reader doesn't pause and is forced to carry on reading to

reach the end of the sentence, and enable them to have a pause. This

is written just how a child would tell a story, by not taking a pause

until the most important bit of a story is told. When the child speaks

of phrases that he hears often, they are written as, 'Gettinguptime,

timeyouwereofftime.' As the child cannot tell the time, he classes

these as ways to tell the time.

U.A. Fanthorpe attempts to recreate the voice and thoughts of the

child by describing a clock as having 'little eyes' and 'two long legs

for walking' meaning the hands of the clock.

In the 8th verse, the deliberate repetition of the opening words of

each line 'Into the' are used to suggest a change of mood. The longer

lines suggest how his mind escapes and his imagination starts to

unwind. This contrasts with the other verses and situation.

When the child writes about his teacher, he uses capitals when

addressing 'Her'. U.A. Fanthorpe has done this to show how important

the child regards the teacher. When the teacher starts talking, U.A

Fanthorpe uses italics to show how he regards her, and also as a

contrast to the normal font used so that her speech catches the

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