Privacy Vs Security

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What's more important, privacy or security? There's an ongoing debate going on between two different groups of people, surveillance supporters and privacy advocates, over privacy. In Bruce Schneier's article, " The External Value Of Privacy", he talks about how privacy is better but in Chris Cillizza's article, " In The Battle Between Security And Privacy, Privacy Always Wins" he talks how security is more important. While Cillizza's article is more specific, it is weaker because he uses a lot of emotional appeals.
One of the greatest strengths of Schneier's article is a based on logic. In paragraph 4, he states, "privacy is important because without it, surveillance information will be abused: to peep, to sell to marketers and to spy on political enemies. " What makes this such a strong piece of evidence is that everybody has secrets to hide. This is important because everybody has a secret to hide and without privacy your secrets and personal information could go to the wrong hands. Another piece of evidence that showcases the strengths of Schneier's writing is in paragraph 7 where he comments, "a Constitution that it never occurred to them to call out privacy as an explicit right. This makes Schneier's the clear winner between these two articles because he uses logical reasoning to the readers that privacy is a basic inherited need in life and without it peoples' personal information could be abused. Opponents might point out that one of the weaknesses of his articles is based on emotions. For example, in paragraph 2, he writes, "privacy is an inherent human right, and a requirement for maintaining the human condition with dignity and respect." Here he attempts to express that privacy is a basic human need, that everyone inhe...

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... his claim makes his opponent the clear victor in this debate.
What do you think is more important, your privacy or your safety? As Cillizza states, " fear is a very powerful motivator." Ever since 9/11, everyone was terrified to have another terrorist attack in the United States and Cillizza is telling us that if we give up our privacy we would have a bigger chance of not having anymore terrorist attacks. Schneier states " privacy is a basic human need" and he is saying everybody needs privacy and there are other ways to lower the risks of our country to get attacked. From these two articles, Schneier's article seems the most convincing. I side with Schneier because he says everybody needs privacy. As citizens of this country, it is important that we all have privacy so people won't have their personal information abused. After all, everybody has a secret to hide.

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