Personal Narrative Analysis

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It was rumored in the third grade that I would have my right hand amputated. This rumor was stemmed from the fact that I broke my arm, where both the ulna and radius were snapped. The people that surrounded me, being doctors and family were frightened at the sight of me holding my dangling hand with the other. Breaking my arm of itself was not a challenge, but it was the recovery that would challenge my determination and character. In the beginning of third grade, I first joined the Wyckoff YMCA Sharks. This program was more than just a swim team to me, it was as though it was a second family. I was with kids that shared talent in swimming similar to my own, and the coaches were always kind. However, I was only allowed to be with this family for a few weeks as my injury took place late September. Both of my parents believed this injury would mark the end of my very short swimming career. By looking at the injured child in front of them, they never would have thought I would be able to get back in the water or keep up with the other kids. …show more content…

I was away from the kids I met on the team, and I wasn’t allowed to do any physical activity. Time went on and I was able to swim once my cast came off. I remember coming back to the first practice and going into the slowest lane. Typically practices were fun and I would swim well in them, but I couldn’t do that when my right arm would go numb after a single lap.These practices tested if I truly loved swimming. I thought to myself that I didn’t have to go through all of this, of quitting, and everything would be more fun playing with friends from school than just swimming with kids I just met. However, I decided to keep swimming, and I didn’t do it out of love for the sport, but to stay with my second family. I kept with the other kids the best I could, and the attention I gave to the coaches elevated. This element of perseverance and commitment was engraved into my

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