Elk Lake-Personal Narrative

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Jack arrived in a town called Elk Lake which was devoid of Elks and Lakes. In fact, the closest thing to a lake it had were the puddles forming in the cracked car-worn streets. There was no forest which meant no elk. The only foliage in sight were dead bushes, meaning that there was nothing to suck in the pollution. Most of the stores had a forlorn look about them as if uttering a sad sigh. Shadows prowled the streets looking for an opportunity to strike their prey. How am I supposed to live here? Not after what happened four years ago”This place looks like a war zone. As he walked down the street people flew in the shadows like ghosts looking for someone to possess.”They know what I did!” He wailed. Jack was 12 years old about 5’2” 90 lbs. His mahogany hair hung down to about his shoulders and curled up at the end. His rusty eyes seemed to match his pupils forming an endless pit of brown. …show more content…

The first thing he noticed were the beer bottles seeming to block out the sun . The second thing he noticed was his uncle passed out drunk in the sink . He was about 5’5” short for an adult but he made up for it in bulk. He 250 lbs. And with the holes in his shirt he looked just like a bowling ball. Jack walked over to him and shook his shoulder lightly. He jerked upright. Pizza stains dotted him like chicken pox. His first words to Jack were “huh who are you, why are you in my house!” To which Jack responded “ I’m your nephew I was sent to live with you” Therefore I must live with you.” You’re Lisa’s kid thought you’d be taller” He mumbled” Well I’m not, where’s my room?”“ Up the hall to the right”His uncle grumbled while grabbing another beer.On the way up he took in the pewter colored walls.This might as well be a prison. Jack’s room was not a room but in fact a closet with a blow up mattress in it. Jack came out furious how am I supposed to sleep on that.” with your body” replied Jack’s Uncle. Who then promptly passed out

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