Diagnostic Writing Assessment

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Diagnostic Writing Assessment
A healthy mother-daughter relationship is very important. This is proven in Amy Chua’s memoir Battle Hymn of a Tiger Mom and Amy Tan’s novel The Joy Luck Club. Even though the books have a similar theme, they are completely different. Amy Chua’s memoir has a frustrating but positive tone, while Amy Tan’s novel has a hateful, bitter, and negative tone. In the excerpt from “The Violin” from the Battle Hymn of a Tiger Mom, Amy Chua has a positive, healthy relationship with her daughter. Chua only wants the best for her daughter but brings it across in a way that frustrates her daughter. It is ironic that Amy Chua yells ”RELAX!”, which is making her daughter Lulu uneasy and irritable, when the key to being successful at playing the violin is being relaxed (Chua 47-48). Amy Chua is trying her best to support what Lulu’s violin teacher instructed her to do but the presence of Chua is making Lulu edgy. Lulu gets frustrated and blurts out,”‘Stop it, Mommy. Just stop it’”(Chua 47-48). This shows that they have a positive mother-daughter relationship that is strained by the …show more content…

The novel is written from the daughter's perspective and the excerpt reveals the relationship Amy Tan has with her mother. She uses a distant, hateful, and bitter tone to illustrate the negative and tense relationship they have. Amy Tan calls her mother, mother which shows the distance between them. For Tan’s mother there is only one kind of daughter. She is forcing Tan to be something she is not and that comes back to haunt her when Tan screams, “‘Then I wish I’d never been born!’ I shouted. ‘I wish I were dead! Like them’”(Tan 141-142). Tan knew that by saying this it would hurt her mother deeply. She wanted exactly that to get revenge on her mother for treating her the way she did. The two have a bitter, hateful mother-daughter relationship that is an ongoing issue between

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