Axolotl Poem Analysis

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When Bennett describes the metamorphosis of Rotpeter, she aims to let the reader understand that there is always a way out. Rotpeter won by his efforts, “the gift of an enhanced capacity to identify exists secreted by an enclosure- be it hybridity” . In the case of Axolotl, it would not be very different. When the man is in the mind of the Axolotl, at first he is scared, eventually he understands that he was one of them, or maybe even all of them. “All of us were thinking human like, incapable of expression, limited to the golden splendor of our eyes looking at the face of the man pressed against the aquarium” . This is the idea that he now understood the moral code of these creatures and he had deliberately cultivated sensibility towards the species.
Bennett discusses the idea of freedom being what one looks for, in the search of enchantment, as how “Freedom may be traced to its association with the pleasure of bodily mobility” . This idea begs to consider if in the case of the Axolotl’s there is any freedom, owing to the fact of the story of Axolotl describing the creature’s environment; “we barely move in any direction and we're hitting one
Bennett gives the example of Franz Kafka’s, The Trial; where as the story progresses, there seem to be more onlookers peering into the window of the protagonist. It seems as if the same kind of idea occurs in Axolotl, in the case of the security guard. Instead of more guards appearing as onlookers while the story progresses, the reader can sense the security guard becoming more hostile, as the man becomes more attached to the Axolotl’s. In the beginning the guard simply smiles and silently observes; this turns into “the guard coughing fussily once in a while as the man glued his face to the glass” . Eventually the guard comes out of his onlooker role and comments that the man is, “eating them alive with his eyes”

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