Zombie Apocalypse Narrative

It was Halloween night and this kid named Roger was excited to go trick or treating. He always ran off and went trick or treating with his friends. The year was 2055 and there was supposed to be an eclipse that night. He lived in Compton C.A near Los Angeles. He met up with his friend John around 5:30pm. They were dressing up as zombies.
“Aye you dawg,” yelled out Roger.
“Wassup foo”, said John
They began getting their costumes on and were putting fake blood on each other. Their plan for the night was too go to an abandoned amusement park. John’s older brother dropped them off and asked them if they had their phones on them.
“yeah”, said John. “It’s at 30% though”.
“Mine just died”, said Roger.
They ran into the amusement park as soon as they got there so nobody could see them. When they got there they realized there was blood all over the walls. They thought someone put there so that they could scare them. When they got to a roller coaster they noticed a body on the floor. They were nervous and scared at this point. As they were walling up to the body his brother called him.

There is a zombie apocalypse all over town its going all over the news! Meet me where I picked you up.”
After the phone call they were frightened. They went to go check up on the body and they saw that he was missing a chunk of his neck. They body on the floor was turning into a zombies, so that meant that there was zombies at the amusement park. They only had pocket knives as their weapons. When they were on their way back they ran into a zombie. They recognized the