Why Is Franklin D Roosevelt Wrong

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(Hook) “When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on.” This was stated by Franklin Delano Roosevelt. (Acknowledge) There was a big amount of people that were against what Franklin D. Roosevelt was attempting to accomplish and that he was the reason that there was a Great Depression. (Thesis Statement) Although, some of those people may or may not be right, Roosevelt did help tremendously by starting the New Deal Program, revising enterprise, and by proposing better use of the land. (Acknowledge) Many of those critics had believed that it is not Roosevelt or ruin, but instead that it is Roosevelt’s ruin (text 2, line 5). (Counter) Roosevelt had not created a ruin though, but instead he had worked hard to pull everyone …show more content…

(Explanation) Therefore, FDR had wanted people to feel more comfortable with their workplace and wanted to improve their lifestyle. (Transitional and Supporting Evidence-B) Another New Deal Program was the …show more content…

(Counter) Those too were wrong about what they had thought about FDR.(Supporting Evidence-A) One piece evidence of that is “endeavor to provide a better use of the land for those best fitted for the land” (Text1, Lines 7-8). (Example) As stated in text 1, lines 15 and 16 that, “accomplishing greatly needed project to stimulate and recognize the use of our natural resources”. (Explanation) He proposed better use of the land to keep track of the harvest and natural resources collected from the land that we live on. (Supporting Evidence-B) Another piece of evidence from text 1, lines 20-21 is “ efforts to raise the value of agricultural products and with this power to purchase the output of our city”. (Example) Along with that in text 1, lines 20-21, “It can be helped by preventing realistically the tragedy of the growing loss through foreclosure of our small homes and our farms”. (Explanation) If the price of the farmers’ crops goes up, then they will be able to live in their little farm homes to cultivate their crops every year and therefore to keep the majority full with food. (Concluding Sentence) To conclude, FDR had came up with very good ideas that would help the farmers and the starvation of many innocent

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