Thesis Outline: The Yellow Wallpaper

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1. Write a Thesis (MUST have a minimum of 2 reasons):
In “The Yellow Wall-Paper”, Charlotte Perkins Gillman constructs the fictional character, Jane, with an emotional bond to writing and desire to become the perfect mother in order to illustrate the struggles that women encounter while living in the realism time period.
2. Write Topic Sentence #1:
Jane’s unconditional bond to writing demonstrates the hardship and adversity many women had to face in the realism time period by portraying a character that is limited and restricted by a male figure.

3. Embedded Concrete Detail #1 to Support TS#1 (be sure to cite properly):
For example, the narrator loves to write but is “forbidden to “work” until [she is] well again” because according to her physician, Jane is suffering from temporary nervous depression and needs to stop all unnecessary work and isolate herself in order to get better (Perkins 648).

4. Commentary to Support CD#1 for TS#1:
Perkins Gillman’s character was limited by her husband, a male …show more content…

The narrator of this short story fell into postpartum depression which is normal for women after giving birth but because of the poor treatment that was given to her, it was dragged a longer period of time. In this period of time, her mindset was severely changing to the point of her obsessing over the yellow wallpaper in her room. Her insanity was mostly caused by her already present depression, however, the pressure of not acting like a proper woman of her time was equally as important. In the cases of Jane, she was able to find freedom from this norm by freeing the imaginary woman in the wallpaper. Nonetheless what happened to Jane could have happened to a real woman in the late 1800’s since forcing high expectations such as being the best trophy wife can affect the mind of many young

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