Creative Writing: All Quiet On The Western Front

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There was no feeling like it. The thrill of war. The heat of a battle. Nothing in the world could compare. It was neither positive nor negative. It just consumed everything; mind, body and spirit. All senses turn off; the only thing he felt was the weapon in his hand and the only things he saw were his targets.
All around him guns were being fired and men were falling.
In the distance, he a saw a yellow green cloud moving towards them, he could no longer see the Germans. He believe, like so many others, that it was a smoke-screen hiding the movement of the enemy coming forwards.
Captains began yelling commands, soldiers were sprinting past him to get to the firing lines of the Trenches. He followed them right into the path of the yellow-green …show more content…

Nonetheless, this was still ten times worse, it was if someone had shoved hot coals into his mouth. Immediately he realized it was a poison. He looked around and everyone had fallen, most likely dead. His captain laid at his feet. He tried to find a way out of the cloud, but he could not breathe. After a minute’s exposure to the gas, he fell.
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Everyone, at least once in their life has known “that guy”. This was the boy whom everyone knew, everyone wanted be friends with, everyone loved and stood out in all he did. He was looked up to by everyone younger than himself, and everyone older respected him. If everyone had gone off to war he was expected to come home, everyone’s last guess would be for him to die first. Nevertheless, when the boys of Appleby School, left their small town of Oakville to go to war, Aubrey Turquand was the first to go and Aubrey was “that guy”.
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Aubrey De Vere Arnold Turquand was born in Toronto, Ontario on September 2, 1896. His father died shortly after his birth of Bright’s disease; his mother, Bertha raised him. He was a man brought up by a …show more content…

He had difficulty breathing sometimes and he would often get sick. He had to get operated on and after the surgery, the nurse would give him boiled water to drink. His throat was always soar and the boiled water did not help matters, however, it was supposed to remove the salts. His thyroid was also enlarging. During his time at Appleby, his mother got married to a military man in Winnipeg. Aubrey would often spend his summer vacations there. His step-father made him curious about life in the military. Bertha was wary about Aubrey’s interest in the military as events in Europe were beginning to heat up and he was still ill. She was even anxious about Aubrey travelling alone to Winnipeg, so she asked Mr. Guest to have someone accompany him. Then the war came out and Canada’s involvement, although not determined yet, was inevitable. Aubrey and school mates were eager to get involved. Few of his classmates enlisted before him and right away they earned high ranks in the military due to their family connections and money. Few of his teacher became involved as well. His stepfather joined straight away leaving his mother alone at home. Now, his mother was struggling more than ever, her husband was, and people renting her land were struggling to pay her due to the

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