“The Scarlet Ibis”’s Mood and What Factors Influence It. If somebody killed their brother, they would probably feel bad about it. Surely they wouldn’t feel happy, unlike the main character of “The Scarlet Ibis.” “The Scarlet Ibis,” is a story about a boy called Brother who has a heavily physically and mentally disabled brother nicknamed Doodle who wasn’t supposed to survive past infancy. Yet he does, but is still told he will never walk. However, in a moment of disdain towards having a disabled brother, Brother decides to teach Doodle to walk. But at the end of the storm, in a moment of vicious pride, Brother leaves Doodle to die in a swamp during a storm as he runs away. Yet the story doesn’t have an entirely sad ending. Overall, “The Scarlet …show more content…
At the very beginning of the story, Brother sits alone and thinks that “The flower garden was stained with rotting brown magnolia petals and ironweeds grew rank [...] the oriole nest in the elm was untenanted and rocked back and forth like an empty cradle.“ (line 1-5). This foreshadows many symbols and the use of language. The most obvious is the rotting brown magnolia petals, showing death and sadness. The author also states the ironweed is “growing rank” (blooming). These are flowers whose bloom is associated with the oncoming of fall, which is a symbol of death. Describing the oriole nest as “like an empty crib” implies the death of a child. These create a dark mood which, later paired with the happy mood of the main story, creates a complex and bittersweet feeling. Another type of foreshadowing outside of word choice is through the actions of the characters. In one scene, Brother puts Doodle in a loft he cannot climb down from and makes him touch his coffin. They begin to talk about it. “Doodle studied the mahogany box for a long time, then said, “It’s not mine.” “It is,” I said. “And before I’ll help you down from the loft, you’re going to have to touch it.” “I won’t touch it,” he said sullenly. “Then I’ll leave you here by yourself,” I threatened, and made as if I were going down.“ (106-111) This foreshadows Doodle’s inevitable death through Brother’s intervening hand. It …show more content…
Brother had just taught Doodle to walk and was showing it to his family, yet he began crying when Doodle walked and, when asked why, thought, “They did not know that I did it for myself; that pride, whose slave I was, spoke to me louder than all their voices, and that Doodle walked only because I was ashamed of having a crippled brother.” (line 181-184). This shows that while he did a great thing, he was selfish and hateful. This creates a difference in emotions because on the one hand he taught his brother to walk, yet on the other hand he only did so because he was ashamed of having a disabled brother. He may have done good things, but he was fueled by hate and was driven to change who his brother was for his own pride, a perspective we would not have gotten if we did not have his point of view. Now, while in this case his pride led to a good outcome, it does not always end as such. In the scene where Doodle dies, the two brothers had gone to practice running but it began to storm, “The knowledge that Doodle’s and my plans had come to naught was bitter, and that streak of cruelty within me awakened. I ran as fast as I could, leaving him far behind with a wall of rain dividing us.” (371-373). This shows how his point of view affects the story. It does so by taking what would be seemingly
Throughout “The Scarlet Ibis” by James Hurst, Doodle is met with kindness and cruelty when interacting with his brother. The shifting attitude of Doodle’s brother is a wonderful example of the shifting emotions of the people around the world. Just like Doodle’s brother, people are happy, sad, jealous, prideful, angry, cruel, and kind. Although times and circumstances may change, people can’t live without their
In the short story ‘The Scarlet Ibis” Doodle's older brother, the narrator, pushes Doodle too hard. The setting of the story is in the country, near a swamp and the ocean. The scarlet Ibis, casket, and bleeding tree are significant symbols which reveal the theme: don’t push too hard, all people have breaking points.
The knocking ceased suddenly, although the echoes of it were still in the house. He heard the chair drawn back and the door opened. A cold wind rushed up the staircase, and a long loud wail of disappointment and misery from his wife gave him courage to run down to her side, and then to the gate beyond. The street lamp flickering opposite shone on a quiet and deserted road.” This quote explains foreshadowing because it shows tension in this part because when the father makes the last wish for his son to go back to the grave the knocking stops all of a sudden. I chose this because while reading the story this hit me a lot and it grabbed my attention because after he made the last wish everything went back to normal and their son went back to the
Author James Hurst once quoted, “I did not know then that pride is a wonderful, terrible thing, a seed that bears two vines, life and death.” Why does life end out the way it does when pride infects it with its poison? In “The Scarlet Ibis” by James Hurst, pride proves to be more wonderful than terrible for the characters.
So instead of being gentle he Makes doodle do things that he is not supposed to do. For example, the narrator’s dad made doodle a go cart so that the narrator could pull him around, but the narrator taught doodle to walk out of pride just because he did not want to pull him. So with more things that doodle does, the more he suffers and eventually leads to his death when doodle’s weak heart could not handle when doodle tried to run from the storm.
When Doodle was born, the narrator "...wanted more than anything else someone to race to Horsehead Landing, someone to box with, and someone to perch within the top fork of the great pine behind the barn..."(595). Upon discovering Doodle was not only crippled but also not "'all there'", the narrator selfishly decides to kill his little brother by suffocation. His plan was halted when he watched his brother grinned right at him. Though the narrator didn't kill Doodle, the narrator treated his little brother with cruelty to advance his own desires. Two instances are the reason Doodle walked and Doodle's training in his brother's program. Firstly, the reason that the narrator is determined to teach Doodle to walk was not solely out of kindness. "When Doodle was five years old, I was embarrassed at having a brother of that age who couldn't walk, so I set out to teach him"(597). The narrator is embarrassed that he has a brother that's physically unable to meet the narrator's expectations as what his brother should be. Yet, the narrator successfully taught Doodle how to walk, but in doing so, the narrator gained a false sense of infallibility that's equal only to his pride. The narrator thus created "...a terrific development program for him, unknown to mama and daddy, of course” (599). Several obstacles impeded the progress of the program, resulting in the brothers to double their efforts. The narrator made Doodle"...swim until he turned blue and row until he couldn't lift an oar. Wherever we went, I purposely walked fast, and although he kept up, his face turned red and his eyes became glazed. Once he could go no further, so he collapsed on the ground and began to cry"(601). Blinded by his desire to satisfy his pride, he became ignorant of the fact that as a sick child Doodle is unable to overexert himself, but the
In the story, the narrator's pride sometimes takes him over and eventually kills his brother Doodle. At the end of the story, the narrator " as I [He] lay sheltering my fallen scarlet ibis from the heresy of rain" (176).
In the short story “The Scarlet Ibis” by James Hurst, Doodle is an ‘ugly duckling’
In the short story, “The Scarlet Ibis”, we know that the theme is, one day everything will end, so instead of wanting and wishing for more, appreciate what you have now. This is true because the quote, “I wanted more than anything else someone to race to Horsehead Landing, someone to box with,” displaying that Brother wanted a younger sibling, but soon realized that his sibling William Armstrong (Doodle) would not be able to play like other children. However, he had hope. “It was bad enough having an invalid brother, but having one who possibly was not all there was unbearable, so I began to make plans to kill him by smothering him with a pillow. However, one afternoon as I watched him, my head poked between iron posts of the bed, he looked straight at me and grinned, I skipped through the rooms, echoing through the halls, shouting, ‘Mama, he smiled. He’s all there! He’s all there!’ and he was,” reveals that the narrator wished that Doodle wouldn’t be crazy, and that he hoped, deep down, Doodle would get better and be able to play with him. Once Doodle
Doodle's brother would only do this to have control on Doodle and Doodle's actions. This control, which Doodle's brother wanted, gave him enjoyment to boss around his brother, enjoyment to boss a crippled kid. And that Doodle walked only because his brother was ashamed of having a crippled brother. It was bad enough having an invalid b....
In order to represent that the narrator's pride caused him to act with ill manners towards Doddle, Hurst creates the internal conflict which portrays the narrator’s struggle to choose what is more important, his pride or his brother. As the narrator confessed his past to the reader, he described a memory about how Doodle walked and he announced to the family that the narrator was the one who taught him. The narrator thus responds with: “They did not know that I did it for myself; that pride, whose slave I was, spoke to me louder than all their voices; and that Doodle walked only because I was ashamed of having a crippled brother” (Hurst 419). It is important to note how the author compares the narrator to a “slave” of pride, the word slave connotes that the narrator is imprisoned by pride and creates the appearance that the force is inescapable. Throughout the story pride dictates the narrator, if
Brother’s goals started to get out of hand once he taught Doodle how to walk he wanted Doodle to learn how to do everything. In the story he says, “ I would teach him to run, to swim, to climb trees, and to fight… I set the deadline for these accomplishments less than a year away.”(Check if this is need or not) (167)(Textual support- 3) Brother didn’t think about Doodle when setting this goal, he didn’t about the strain and impact this would have on Doodle’s body and on Doodle’s mind. (change the wording of this
James Hurst's short story, "The Scarlet Ibis" reveals that the brotherly bond between the narrator and Doodle is an essential component in the story. If Doodle was a girl, the brotherly connection and bond would be lost, resulting in many variations throughout the story. If Doodle was a girl the narrator probably wouldn't spend as much time with Doodle. A brother-brother relationship is very different than a brother-sister relationship. Doodle would likely be closer to another female such as her mother.
Neither did the burden from his brother nor the harsh defeats in training Doodle took away the narrator’s born-within pride. Throughout the entire story, the narrator’s actions toward his brother were either cruel or loving, such contradicting emotions did make him suffer in the end. Whereas the narrator regrets his actions of leaving Doodle behind, which resulted in Doodle’s death and he now have to bear the pain and shame for losing his brother his entire
While there are many more significant literary devices throughout the short story, symbolism and foreshadowing are the most prevalent. These devices enhance the story, because they keep the readers attention. Symbolism and foreshadowing help the reader better understand the characters and how the brother’s actions lead to the death of Doodle.