The Lonely Land Poem Analysis

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Structure and Techniques of Poetry A sword can be as swift as a current or as calm as a still body of water. Whether you use the blade, or the handle; some damage will be made. Poetry is this sword, that once drawn, will always leave a mark. The three poems we read in class, “Not Just A Platform For My Dance”, “The Lonely Land” and “I’m a Canadian”, are all poems regarding Canada. They are also all poems which have a different perspective on what this word Canada means. The first poem, “Not Just A Platform For My Dance” speaks of Canada as something that is not just a piece of land, but also something that exists for healing. This poem is very short in both stanza and poem size. The lines in this poem are relatively short as well. The poem is repetitive of the words “not just” and maintains the concept behind these words throughout the poem. None of the lines begin with a capital letter. Aside from the structure of the poem, the writer uses different …show more content…

This poem is different in many ways to the previous two. This poem has zero stanzas and its lines are consistently long. Rhyming is done throughout the poem. An example of this is when the writer says “I’m Yorkville after dark, I’m a walk in the park” (Redbird, 32-33). Almost all lines in this poem begin with a capital letter. The word “I’m” is repeated almost always at the beginning of each line. This poem does not contain any poetic devices. The only downside to the structure of this poem would be present in the length of the poem. Compared to the other two poems, this one is relatively long and thus appears so on paper. The length of the poem may cause someone to entirely refuse to read the poem, or lose focus of the message being made. However, the consistency of its rhymes makes the reader stay alert and attentive throughout the poem. Thus nullifying the effect the length would

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