The End Of Walking Antonia Malchik Summary

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Americans are losing their freedom to walk this. The author considers a case where an American child lost their life due to an incident between a mother of three and a driver under the influence of drugs. This incident spiked a global debate in respect to the legal actions taken on both the mother – who simply just walked across the street. The author supports her claim with this in addition to numerous other sources. Within Antonia Malchik’s article, “The end of walking”, she informs Americans who walk that the act of walking has become less desirable America and supports it with the use of credibility, short stories and statistics. Antonia Malchik is a freelance copy editor: with a specialization in magazines and textbooks (Linkedin Malchik). …show more content…

As a walker, Antonia feels compelled to bring this tragedy to the spotlight. In 2010, CNN reported that Raquel Nelson, a mother of three children, lost her four-year-old son to a hit-and-run accident while crossing a four-lane road and was convicted with three misdemeanors in addition to jailtime (CNN). Although the mother was the victim, she was sentenced more jailtime than the man who struck and killed her son while intoxicated because she was charged with jaywalking, vehicular homicide and reckless conduct. Antonia felt so strongly about Raquel’s case that she even did additional research and unveiled that the crosswalk was about a third of a mile away from her house, while the way she crossed was conveniently closer to Raquel’s apartment. She sympathizes with the mother by declaring that she would have done the same thing in that situation (Malchik). Antonia finds the way the case was handled to be absurd, given that Raquel was the victim of the case. The author defends Raquel’s choice to jaywalk because it is a very human-like thing to do and most convenient given that her children could have been tired. The author stressing her concerns for the results of the mother’s case shows that she cares about Raquel – someone who is a walker. This sense of pity causes an audience to feel emotional towards the matter as well, which builds rapport between the author and audience. When done effectively, this can be considered use of the rhetorical appeal

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