The Boys In The Boat Analysis

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In the Boys in the Boat, author Daniel James Brown writes about a remarkable story using incredibly descriptive words and phrases to evoke strong feelings and vivid imaginations. In doing this, he creates a lot of meaning into places where the audience might not see any particular significance. Captivating word choice, tone, and sentence structure are the three main components that make up a meaningful story. In chapter twelve, there reads a profound opening sentence: “Early one morning that September his wife, Hazel, arose to find Ulbrickson already awake, sitting in his pajamas at an old typewriter, assiduously pecking at the keys” (211). The introductory sentence of this paragraph draws the reader in in a few ways. First, the author gives …show more content…

After dinner, the two men reveled in talking about rowing for hours on end. They discussed boat design and rigging techniques, debated racing strategy, recounted past victories and defeats, and analyzed the strengths and weaknesses of other crews and coaches.”(212). These three sentences stand out for a number of reasons. The language is descriptive enough to leave the reader with a few things to think about. First, the word choice gives off a strong impression of two men who are infinitely fascinated and dedicated to rowing. It reveals the type of relationship Ulbrickson and Pocock share, a friendship that revolves around the love and passion they share for rowing and racing. On one hand, you have George Pocock who was, at the time, the greatest boat builder in the world. He has always been fond of the art of boat building since a very young age: “Most of all, it was a chance to do what Washington coaches had been doing since 1913-to learn something from Pocock, whether it was an apt quote from Shakespeare, a better way to sequence a race, or how to understand the inner workings of an oarsman’s mind” (213). This sentence was impactful because it reminds the reader about the kind of talent and role Pocock had. Pocock could effortlessly explain how each and every tool had different functions and uses when putting a shell together, recognize different types of wood

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